|Reviews for Untitled|
| Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
| FALLING-ANGEL24 chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
Im sorry to say but it doesnt sound like its finished. I think you should add more chapters
| Azul Angel1251596 chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
plz update soon
| xenocanaan chapter 2 . 5/8/2008
I can't wait for the next one!
| xenocanaan chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
It was good
| GhostRein chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
GREAT STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE IT! !
| WondaKat chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
Ho, Radical. I like the story line. good work. keep it up!
| Steph2 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I like it. It's a good storyline. I like stories with Haou in them. He was a cool villian wish he stayed evil longer in the show. Anyways keep it up.
| Terafon chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
So, she approves of mass genocide? Killing everyone who gets in his way for the sake of a card? Wow, she's totally Juudai's perfect match.
| Spirit of Water - Aqueria chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
...HAOU X OC YEY.
Please don't make her a Mary-sue.