|Reviews for Forever Dreams|
| Quiet Moon chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
-cheers, claps- Beautifully written! I absolutely love the character study element in this. You're watching how Kiba views Sakura as they grow up, go through life, knowing that in the midst of it all, he still holds his love for her. You're seeing the desperation that he has to make her happy, no matter what the cost, just as long as she has happiness, that he'll do anything for her. The last scene was a great input, the little wish scene; the last line was just plain genius! I am serious, this is great! Love it, love it, love it! -glomps, then goes away to go to bed-
| amukWrites chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
...that is so bittersweet (and I like how you didn't end it happy. That would have ruined it.)
I also like how you show his viewpoint changing over time, how she changed and the end...Poetry. Pure Poetry.
(...*sigh* I feel guilty. I'm leeching off of Annie's birthday presents...which is a bad thing...)