Reviews for Closer
FuN FiFi chapter 1 . 4/23
This is a great companion one-shot fic to your other brilliant multi-chaptered fic, Free Will and Fate! What makes it so great is that you explored Harry and Hermione's passion without any interference. I mean, this fic simply showed their desires and nothing else, which I found quite refreshing since your other story had much going on, but that's not to say that I didn't enjoy it, because I did, very much so! :-)

Overall, I think that Harry's reluctance to accept Hermione into his life like she wants to be was a good plot point that you utilized very well. I definitely enjoyed reading about Hermione's adamance in making Harry truly hers. Harry's confusion over his situation is justified, but Hermione obviously knows him better than anyone and it's this key part of their relationship that makes their pairing the ultimate ship in HP fandom in my opinion :-)
cutiebrypie chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
I liked this.
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
nice story
ToManyLetters chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Well, that's a lovely little piece. I've always had a very certain soft-spot for Harmionian stories. Perhaps it stems from my hopes of an evolving relationship between the two of them from the earlier books. Hey, before I read the chapter, "Hermione's Secret" could have been anything, right?

This was very well written and was sweet and deliciously intense without being unnecessarily smutty.
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
If I may ask you of this, could you Kill that sigment in ch.15 and replace it with this, this one is 10 times better,

Later.

Primus2021
WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
*sigh* . . .well, I'm in one of those moods today, and I needed a good li'l erotic fix. Nice, Sara.

All Harry needed: get laid!

You've managed to make me all happy for Harry even though he's with Ron's girl . . . sorry, I couldn't resist ;-D

This was a great alternate ending to that room. I actually might have made things even a bit more awkward between them. Harry's no great Lothario after all. I'm glad you stopped short of saying that Hermione experienced "la petite morte," her first time, but it was still tender and beautiful all the same.

Damn! I hate you for getting me to read H/Hr smut! But only in that good type of hate! Like I hate you for making me remember about Daria back in the 90's and now I've got something that takes up more of my time.
Prongs85 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Nice one. I guess I might have to read the main story to understand how they came to this situation though.
xxxTrojan-Princessxxx chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Wow, really good. That's all I can say really apart from well done!
allycat1186 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Amazing!
Ratdog chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
If only JK could have read this before pairing Harry with Ginny!
I'myoursweetestgoodbye chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Wow, this was definitely an alternative to that other chapter! I can't really think of anything else to say...wow.