|Reviews for Enemy, Frienmy or Lovemy?|
| readingrox101 chapter 7 . 8/10/2011
How can this story possibly be anything around the subject of Land of Elyon?
| Holly Muncho chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
This is original fiction. You are on a site called fanfiction. Doesnt work very well, does it? Try Fiction Press (w . fictionpress . com, without spaces), its for original fiction.
| xpskl chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
interesting. if you need a beta reader than i'll do it. im bored anyway
| XCrystalRaindrops chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
Im soo friggin cool in this story. heehee, i love tha bit, with me getting my bro back. Corse if he did that in REAL Life.
so so dead.
I WANNA READ IT AGAIN!
it seem shorter on fan fic -.-
| Paths Crossing chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
You DO know that you're supposed to post only FANFICTION here, not original work. (and I suggest you put some work into it.)
| ASDW chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
You have really bad grammar. It made the story difficult to read. I gave up half way through.
| XCrystalRaindrops chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Heya! It's moi you *insane* friend jenni! thanx 4 that bye the way! I remeber reading this it's awesome but i'll catch up on stuff i havnt read!
| DivinelyLoved chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
This is really good! but I think you should definitely break it into a bunch more chapters. It's REALLY hard to read right now because it's so long! You have a lot of grammar mistakes so watch out for that. Also I think this could be amazing if you put more detail. If you described every bodies emotions and describe what everything looked like it would be awesome. So just look over it again. I hope I don't sound too mean! because I'm not trying to be!