|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| fmf08 chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
oH MY! i have no words for how much this is perfect! amazing!
| Captain Meghan chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Very detailed description and remarkably believable. Elizabeth spying the boat, recognizing her craziness, but paddling out there anyways reminds me of a part similar to it in Curse of the Black Pearl. There were a couple grammar errors, but I've never put much stock in that myself :) Well done.
| Animal Mongoose chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Loved it! She should have never married the WHELP!
| foxboro chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Beautifully written smut but the storyline needed expanding (or a continuation).
| Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
NIce done, but there's missing a continuation!
| BlondBond chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Yeah, too short, and Jack did not actually say a thing :-/ Inrteresting plot, but the whole story could be better written. Thnx anyway.
| Kelsey chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Unfortunately, the only line that really sounded to me like it was Jack speaking was “I’m good with ‘at.”
Other than that, It was fairly well-written:]
| paul chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
wow! your a great writer! awesome story
| tasha chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Great story. Please write another Jack/Elizabeth. They so belong together.
| JustAnotherAuthorDurping chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Smutty as it was, it was not too smutty. Your descriptions in this story was the thing that made it enjoyable smut, and not overbearing smut. The descriptions were quite fantastic, particularly original. The characters worked well, and it was just a nice little guilty pleasure to read. :3 Great fic.