|Reviews for Thunder|
| Gigicomics chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
I love your fanfic please do more chapters
| Mists of Ribbon chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
I just wish it was longer...
| 123 chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
I liked the story veeeeery much but I wished it had been longer
| ideagala chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
was cool and naughty and lol more please
| narakunohime chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
| Kirtash chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Hi!I like your fic.i'm not used to read fics where Ginji begins XD,but it'was good!I thin Ban isnt going to sleep!Write more fics!Bye
| Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Short and cute. My only critique is a grammatical error with speech. You write speech in this style:
“Watching you”, Ginji answered with a smile and stroke the man’s cheek.
The comma should go within the parenthesis. So it should look like:
“Watching you," Ginji answered with a smile and stroke the man’s cheek.
It's just a small and repeating error that can be easily fixed. Everything else is very nice. :)
| Howls-Princess-loves-EdwardRoy chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I love it, that was so cute!
| Ginji-Hearts chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I really liked this fic. Its really CUTE. The only thing is that it should probably be rated teen to be safe. Please keep writing.
| Ceda chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Hello! of course i like it! i love Ban and Ginji! and also this fic...you let the end, in our imagination... i like that! hope you can write some more! because i love your fics, and the way you write! until then! take care...bye! )
| dk-joy chapter 1 . 3/27/2008