Reviews for Loves Greatest Challenge
Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
I'm a fan of your K/18 fics but this is the first where I read huge disconnects from the plot. there was no resolution of the rape. it got pushed aside by everything else. It's a fic with lots of details that somehow got sidetracked pulling away the focus of what this story is all about.
yuriko777 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
let's beat the living crap out o of vegeta I like 17 when he's not killing people
Burke23 chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Sooo... 18 has reproductive organs?

Pizza... I never would've guessed.

"Can I have your number?"

Does Bulma have a lot of parties?

Goddamit Roshi, you cock block.

Ah 17. Good times.
Fly Dragon chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
This story was beautiful! And it was nice and long, which made it even better! The suspense with Vegeta hurting Krillin was also very good! After all every good story needs its drama, and this was perfect, Vegeta made a perfect 'villain' for this story! Your works have always caught my attention, in fact there all I've been able to read for these past few days,and now I'm going to go read your story"And then you'll know." Since it's the longest one I saved it for last, as a grand finally, but that doesn't mean, I can't wait to read more from you after! XD
sarah chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
i loved it it was so romantic please write some more stories
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Awwe sooo cute but nextime make chapters!but still good!
hottelamote chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
This was an amazing story! i am so faving this 1!
ssjmairiprincess chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
that is an amazing one shot i just loved it.

~the ssj daugter of broly
AReallyDumbWriter chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
In the part after Krillin was thinking who could have damage 18, stop was spelled stoop. Just fix it and you'll be fine.

The story really good so far
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
A wonderful story. I had quite a few lol's - This I definitely going on my favorites. I also love that Goku's alive in this fic.
Gothicthundra chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
That was completly rockin'... I loved how 17 gave her away at the end... that was cute and a great bro/sis moment.
Jimidamaru chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
(CRYING) Such a beautiful story! I so moved...(Continues to cry)
Ringo-Crimson-Apple chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Bell-Dell chapter 1 . 1/14/2003
yeyeyeyeyey!Good!You write so many good K/18 fics!I still wonder how you do it!Keep it up!
Chrystal chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
Wow,this was so nice.I checked your profile and read you had alot of K/18 get one was I think the rest will be ,I need to keep reading!Daswiedaneie,

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