Reviews for The Fallen
XxXpeace-love-twilightXxX chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so sad! omg god pleeease write more of this story it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good omg omg omg omg xxx i love your wriiting! XD ] :) :P P
Flauge Fang chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
This was a basic story, but was nice to read! Very nice! :)
brixy chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
oh...

so sad...

:,-(
Black-Feline chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Wow this is really cool, i like it and i hope you keep going! Now if you don't mind i have to go read one of your other stories... lol

Black-Feline :) :P
765876587658 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Wow, that was just...just...beautiful. Do you understand what I mean? I can't think of any other way to describe it. Haunting, but beautiful. The way you wrote it was just perfect to me. It was very well done! Great job!

rain is my refuge
livingmylife96 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
WOW. that was good!
Eillac chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Beautifully written. My heart aches for poor Esme.

-Alex
bexxy chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Oh gosh, this was really well written and very powerful. It's sad, I really feel for Esme. You've done a beautiful job.
The Prettiest Wallflower chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
that was pretty amazing! i was unique compared to other stories!
down the oubliette chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
"Isaella" you've done it again. I'm amazed. I haven't read much Esme, but you put so much feeling and emotion into this that it just affects me a lot. Marvelous, darling. WRITE MORE!
Ducky Ducksworth chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
umm, wow, thats really...ya

were you depressedf when you wrote this or something? cus thats not healthy
unicorn1293 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
OMG YAYAYAYAYAYYA! THAT WAS SO GOOD! UPDATE SOON PLEASE I WANT TO READ MORE!
alittlebitwarped chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
This is really great. Esme is my favorite female Cullen and I love reading stories about her. PLEASE KEEP GOING!
Angeliss chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Wow. I got to the end, and I suddenly realized that I'd been holding my breath the entire time I was reading. Usually I only do that if the character is underwater, and that's only for movies. This, however... It was beautiful. Absolutely lovely. Thank you for writing this. And thank you, Karen, for typing it out so I could read it... I have found yet another favorite!

By the way, is this just a oneshot, or will you go further with it?
dreamtofly chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
oh i love that you're making a story for esme!

love the story so far!

please update soon!