Reviews for Poisoned
Rose-O's chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
One day I was just playing Pokemon Diamond when this random obsession overcame me on how Dawn and Lucas should date. Weird, right?

But anyhow that was a very good story! Quite excellent to be exact!

I hope you make a sequel to this, though I doubt it.

Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Oh and Dawn dose not have raichu she has a pachirusu still great story except a kiss would be better
Guest chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
The blond haired boys name is Barry and Lucas dose not have an infernape he has a torterra which is canon so instead of infernape say rapidash but good story
Karanma Maeryl chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
Aww... This is a cute and sweet three-shot of Lucas and Dawn! This is my new favorite Pokemon fic! :D

Keep up the AMAZING work, buddy! ;D ..And have a good day! O:)

Karanma Maeryl
Naoki Nyan chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
You're one heck of a scary writer, making me worried and all like that.. I'm even cheering here like 'Live Lucas! LIVE! Don't you die on me you freak!' XD

Because you know, I love Lucas Please keep it up and make it more reassuring XD
X chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
Nice! The best of the best!
Pokedude chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
0_0 you are a good writer. Nuff said.
Bradley5455 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
I love this story!

You should conside a sequel! I would love to read it!
glaceon chapter 3 . 3/5/2010
This was so totally cute!

You have inspired me! :D
KARIN848 chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
Cute! But why did you name Damion/Barry/Jun as Wilis? Anyway I LOVE this story! Great job!
amethyst-dreams27 chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
Wow, this is my favourite story of yours so far. I'm a sucker for Dawn/Lucas fluff. Please write more Dawn/Lucas!

wtfoctagon chapter 3 . 1/4/2009
I seriously don't know how to start this review.

No cliche parodies, no intervention from the startlingly crappy show, this was great.

You rounded it off very nicely; romance fitting for teenagers. 'perhaps' ;have I ever known the beauty of that world 'till now?

One small 'smidge', shall I say, in your fanfiction is that the storyline was a bit too plain. Taking it a bit upbeat might have been better, but maybe that's just my opinion.

I do hope that you will do another fanfiction about Lucas and Dawn. Happy writing!
SynctrainerLucas chapter 3 . 7/2/2008
I am glad that Lucas lived.
SynctrainerLucas chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Sad start.
Undeletable chapter 3 . 4/19/2008
A nice ending to a nice story.

Well done.
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