|Reviews for Other Promises|
| ArtificialLung chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Haha, don't mind AL, I'm on a rampage it seems.
This particular fic was great- a nice little twist at the end which had me going 'Ahh.' The build up was splendid. I had my suspicions yet I just wasn't sure... and then, at the end, there it was.
Bittersweet and passionate. It was a sordid little affair in the dead of night lit by a fire not so easily put out.
At first, I thought perhaps the use of 'he' and other like pronouns were used so freely, I was initially uncertain as to whether who it described would be clear.
But reading on, I found that it was, in a way, very clear, and that it leant to the flow of the piece. Change it, and I'm not sure I could say the same.
So once again, here's another one shot that did not dissapoint. If I could, I'd love to share your work with a few fellow KH enthusiasts. :3 I'm certain they'd love it as well.
| anonny chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
oh my... you definately should post this in the kink meme, it's very dark and gritty and the language is very, very good. awesome job!
| WayToDawn chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
HEY! Got here from your post in khyaoi
Haven't got an account there. Or here. So uh, anon it is.
I absolutely love this, you should've posted it in the meme! Though it might be late for it, I'm still glad you put it here.
By the first few lines I already forgot your summary, so finding out near the end that it was actually Sora all the time really caught me off guard.
Gorgeous style, just perfect!
| Strange Ink chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I loved this one-shot! I love the writing an dhow descriptive it was without being vulgar or anything like that. I love a good AkuRoku fic; you should do more.
-adds to favourites-