Reviews for The Game of Life
kokoronagomu chapter 2 . 3/20/2010
ah yes, mothers have that uncanny ability to discern what's going on- like eyes in the back of their heads.

this was sweet, and a bit racy. it would be a wonderful thing if you were still writing- you're quite good at it.

thank you,


kokorongaomu. deviantart. com
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 2 . 1/17/2009
Lmao.. XD That was kind of unexpected XD Very cute

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Lmfao. Awesome XD

Ari chan
Alina18 chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
You're a Mom? ...Sorry, I guess that's been made pretty obvious, but I'm just sort or surprised. I guess I always thought of fanfic writers as being college age or under. Anyways, awsome fic.

Alina Scharwyn
tcl7189 chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
too funny and Totally true...
LogicalGoth chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
Cute story you should make another one like it!


SkinnyCynic chapter 2 . 7/24/2006
Oh...this was so cute...i love it...
Shessy Girl chapter 2 . 6/26/2006
is there gonna be more?
Shessy Girl chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
its really good! there gonna be more'graphic' stuff though?
skenshingumi chapter 2 . 1/21/2006
That was funny and adorable. I like how determined they both can be. I do think it is funny that Kenshin knows he can use his hair against Kaoru. I think that would work on most women, don't you?
skenshingumi chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
That was very cute and sexy although I wonder about the use of ki. Quite a nice idea.
Fan of Kenshin chapter 2 . 11/16/2004
this is interesting, that it is

keep up the good work, miss Susan

I mean that, that I do
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
that was so sweet!
913paradox chapter 2 . 3/6/2004
i liked it... - it was well-written and it had some pretty good techniques *eyes her boyfriend evilly*
MNH4477 chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
Heh. This does relate to what we were talking about. Kenshin was very slick the first time. I give him props for that, but Kaoru gets even more props for out maneuvering him in the end. _

Good story.

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