Reviews for Larten's Last Breath
Corey Fitzwilliam chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Awww! That was so sad and so sweet and so fluffy and so sad! And like brilliant too... But so sad! (Don't worry, I like sad fics) and this was so brilliant, weaving in a non-canon relationship into the story that actually happened. It was so amazing!
xEmerald Isle chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Aww, this is soo sad! I loved reading it though.

Make more LartenxDarren fics please! :D
KaliturnedSaviour chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I LIKED IT ! But I couldn't get why you kept jumping around so much.
vampires assistant chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I nearly cried. This is really good.
AllTimeNatalie chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Aww, I cried at the end and I was like Oh My God that was so sad. Why, why take Mr Crepsley away? and when he said 'Good night my Prince!' Aww so cute and adorable! Really good and sad. :) Good job.
felineBeat chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
ooh. Its sad. I teared up at the end D:

Fave'd 3
Appleblush chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
aw nice :)
iBlackCarnival chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
omfg D:


Im getting this horrible pain in my chest off it, (is sad)

this is so sad~
Petal Painter chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
omg. That actually made me cry :'(

Dude...i love this story 3

you're so good at this..please write more )
xXVampireXx chapter 1 . 3/28/2008

your righting skills are amazing! i love evanescence, you just inspired me to put in a CD of theirs! haha

you make awesome LCxDS stories! i would like to see more soon!