Reviews for Footsteps of Doom
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
This was a good one-shot story.

You really gave a lot of good, vivid details on what Frodo was thinking, feeling, seeing, and the presence of the Ring seconds into he lost control and fell within its power. I still don't like the scene when Gollum bites Frodo's finger.

I found no grammatical errors or typos, which was good.

You did a good job with this one-shot.

-Aria Breuer
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Metropolis Kid chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Well, my knowledge of LOTOR is a little limited, having only seen the movies. That said, I did enjoy this. You did a good job of playing up the temptation, and I liked the contrast between the ring and the chamber. (The chamber being hot and molten; yet, even there, the ring being cold. The camber being overpowering, almost awe inspiring; and the ring being so simple and beautiful.) It did a nice job of showing how innocent temptation can appear from the outside. (Just one look, one drink, one puff, one time; what can it hurt? Until you see the fire raging behind it.) Anyway, despite my limited knowledge, I still enjoyed this.

Have a good day, and God bless.

Metropolis Kid.