Reviews for New Challenges Prolouge: Transitions
Magister chapter 1 . 11/11/2001
Interesting beginning, just a couple of nit-picks here. First off, I doubt Shampoo is frightened of Akane. Shampoo is the best martial artist of the fiancee brigate. She is also stronger than Akane (according to the Manga) the one point even Ranma makes about her. Ukyo is a different point, as I usually see her as more open to others than most of the Ranma cast and unlikely to have that severe a reaction to the failed wedding. Depressed and angry, certainly, but not going on a week long drinking binge. The Kunos were right on (some of the hardest characters to keep consistent, since their maddness seems to have some pattern) and I liked your dealings with them. Nabiki was very well done also. I'll write again when I read more of your story.
Ushio chapter 3 . 9/27/2001
Very interesting you got me hooked i say MORE.
Ryoshu chapter 3 . 9/27/2001
very neat story so far. I like the detailing of the characters. very cool. thank you for sharing your work and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful stories in the future.