|Reviews for Just Breathe|
| I am the girl in the corner chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
who woke up! what happened! tell me! great story too. :D :D
| Choosing Sarah chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
What beautiful angst you offer
| GuitarGal20 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Wow. That was amzingly well written. Good job.
| BetweenMindAndHeart chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I have too know, was it Abby that survived or the baby, or both maybe? I'm guessing its Abby, but the suspence is driving me nuts, I loved this though.
| kalicious chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Cliff hanger... Gr... Is this going to be a daily update? Or every-other day? Or longer...? Great job.
| Swingflip chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Wait, whicj she survived? I have to know! I hope you write more!
| NCISaddict77 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
it was really good but i am confused at who he chose
| shadowgrl94 chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
(sniffle) thats sad :( but beautiful all the same.
| The Queen of Confusion chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
Wait, so what did he decied?
| Trivette Lover Heather chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
I was confused at times, but then again, I am tired.
Im gonna have to say he chose Abby. Horrible choice to have to make, but he's not the only one who loves her.
Intense piece. Different formatting, diction etc. Very original. Great job.
| Jeff Galus chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Oh please let's Abby and Tim's little girl survive this. Great and(sniff sniff)sad story.
| Morbidmuch chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
OMFG that was sad. Brilliant, but sad. I'm on the verge of tears right now, so good job
| EmeraldFire512 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
i'm... confused. I'm assuming that the baby died, and abby...?
i'm really confused.
but the writng was good. very poetic.
| xoxEllexox chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Absolutely wicked. So...wow.
But who did he choose? Abby or the Baby.
Either way it was...wow.
| Tigerdrake chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Beautiful. I love how open ended it its. It could be either one. I personally believe he chose the baby, but I know that has more to do with how I see the characters than anything you wrote in. I love that its completely open to interpretation and is so heart-tuggingly haunting at the same time. Lovely.