Reviews for He is the lamb
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
It was great! I know it's a one shot but you should keep going!
Silkyway chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Ohhh my yes! Continue please!
yo chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I am a unicorn and I have a pet dragon
anny2010 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
love it
Atramentous StygianIron chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Brill.

Continue!
FitzCullen chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Pls continue, great work!
Edwardanthonymasencullengirl chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I thought it was very intimate
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
loved it!
ColourMeChaos chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
That was really good and extremely well-written story. Brilliant for a first lemon!
Twilightfan108 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
nice
Undead Gothic Princess chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
i really liked this but i have one comment.

Unless the story is full sex, its only classed as a lime.

Limes are foreplay, Lemons are sex lol

it was totally awsome and sweet, most people make it sound real dirty but urs is more realistic xx
shaneqa chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
you need to write mor to this story girl...i read it and want more
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Nicely done
MyLifeIsEdwardCullen chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
AH I LOVE IT! Plz could u read my story: Look past the veil of hate? It would mean a lot! Please could u also review? Thank you! X
robin-alison chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
cute! :) needs a little work but with a little help you could be a great lemon writer... :) nice one, keep em coming
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