|Reviews for Broken Windows and War Music|
| amamsy bruh chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Inside, Max was screaming, screaming ‘‘Lucy….keep your hands off my things!’’ He choked back this bizarre rage, and it felt like trying to swallow cotton balls.
Best. Setence. Ever.
But I love this.
| amatorius48 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
geez that was kind of angsty but I LOVED it! I loved what you said about his eyes in the second paragraph. And I liked the whole thing. (to me) It felt like Lucy had stolen Jude (the one thing Max maybe had all to himself) from him and that made me teary. I was almost expecting you to say something about the war being all his own, or something along those lines.
anyway, this is a wonderful fic that's going into my faves.