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| hattergems chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
The paragraphs are really big. I find it difficult to concentrate, but that's my problem. I have a short attention span. And I'm sleepy. Great that you're writing something with Bradley.
| Kizu-89 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Very goodily written and i think you have been reading FMA much, because you surely can write characters like they should. Thanks for writing it!