Reviews for The Maelstorm Tiger
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
I loved what you've done with this story, but there's a few thinks I'd like to request. Sakura x Ino just sounds weird! I think they should be straight and be Naruto's wives! Now if you still want that kinky-ness then you can always have Sakura and Ino make out while Narutos having sex with his other women, but I think you should make it to where Ino and Sakura are straight and not lesbians! Gross! Also, Kushina showing up at the end of chapter 6. You made it sound like someone raped her and now they're returning to Konoha. I hope that's not the case. I think you should make Kushina one of Narutos wives. Naruto deserves the best. Kushina is a sexy woman. Incest, kinky-ness, harem, equals epic. I think you should make Naruto get all of his women pregnant. As far as as his harem of wives goes it should include: female Haku, Sakura, Hinata, Temari, Kushina, Karin, Tayuya, Tsunade, Mei, Samui, and Mikoto.
x dude chapter 5 . 10/22/2012
this story has a great plot, and at a time was one of my favorites, though time has passed I still have an interest in this fic and its plot I would love to see more of it from you.
geetac chapter 6 . 1/26/2010
I enjoyed reading the story's chapters and would like more of it.
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 6 . 12/19/2009
Is this story discontinued?
Seriously chapter 6 . 10/12/2009
No! Stupid cliffhangers...
beast of the 7 suns megidoh chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
all the other stuff is cool but SASUKES A PERV ROFL SUPER BEATDOWN SAKURA STYYLE ROFL ROFL ROFL
Kenta Raikiri chapter 4 . 6/27/2009
Kenta: HAHAHAHA! That was priceless...I love it when writers do that,

*flashback* (readers have those too!)

Back at the Haruno-Uzumaki Compound

Having left to give the report she had, Uzuki Yuugao had returned to the Haruno-Uzumaki Compound for something no woman could pass up.

“There, there!” she moaned out, “Harder! HARDER!” she cried in pleasure.

“Like that Yu-Chan?” Naruto asked from behind her naked form.

“Yes!” came the breathless answer.

“Thought so,” Naruto said as he continued to massage the purple haired woman’s back.

*End flashback*

I love it when writers make you think it's one thing, and then make it to where it's COMPLETELY Different than what they thought at first...awesome.

Also, Inari being part of the Konohamaru Corps.? Nice, still...I wonder what those two girls that attacked/tried to inform Naruto wanted...A Mystery...

You sir, are really good at creating suspense. Though there are still parts that you lose me in...

none-the-less, I hope you don't lose the spark for this fic...though you might have already...I hoope not...

Kenta Raikiri
Kenta Raikiri chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
Kenta: I think i'm getting a fore-sight...Karin, Tayuya, and Kin are leaving Otogakure and heading for Konoha...right? or are they heading to whirlpool or something?

either way, i'm getting more and more excited readint the suspense of these stories!

can't wait to read more!

but that last part was REALY confusing...

Kenta Raikiri
Kenta Raikiri chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Kenta: poor sasuke...hopefully you won't make him too power-hungry...

anyway, nice story! I hope to continue reading! but it will have to wait for now...
Phoenix Lee Evyns chapter 6 . 6/19/2009
interesting story, looking forward to the next update.

Please have Naruto and team kick snake-faces rearend into the next lifetime and further. That was when I stopped liking Sasuke as much, it ruined the show for me to a point.
Please Read my stuff chapter 6 . 6/10/2009
awsome
mina chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
I barely made it past the italics. This is nearly incomprehensible. You should get a beta.
ShadowFoxKage chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
I really like this story and hope you continue it as I can't wait to see where you take it next.
spiritwolf35 chapter 3 . 5/1/2009
Sorry to say this but I got to stop reading this story why well I hate to say it but it sucks it really really sucks when you have Sakura to be very very strong and have it where her clan is well pretty much the way you put it stronger than the Uzumaki clan sorry but this story suck donkey nuts lol sorry
spiritwolf35 chapter 2 . 5/1/2009
Well I do not know what to say other than you lied in chapter one when you said it was revealed to know who his mother and heritage what I mean through your sorry to say this but all through the damn rambling on and on and on about the Land of Whirlpool you never ever said anything about his mother who she is what her name was that and you didnt really say anything about the Uzumaki clan other than there from the Land of Whirlpool and another thing why would Third Hokage have the Uchiha Scroll unless he stole it that and Sasuke is well OC wouldnt he be really really really pissed off when he finds out that Naruto isnt a nobody but he is from a clan and related to the Senji clan so that means Naruto and Sakura are both related to Tsunade but still Sasuke would be pissed off when he knows Naruto is going to be stronger with all his new stuff he is going to learn that and will be able to do stuff Sasuke cannt and dont forget Naruto has new and strong swords that belong to Naruto and not him oh well
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