|Reviews for I Hate Myself For Loving You|
| hot 101 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
| All.The.RageR chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
i love it!
that's some ace writing right there.
| EdwardsKitten chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
| xiomara209 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
aww..funny..i love your story..
| WeasleyWeakness chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I like badass bella and randy edward! :)
| tamponlovesedward1848 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
| Captain Stu chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
and i'm also sensing something good from this one.
man, i'm excited!
| jen babes chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
it wz so funny
cnt wait til u update
| myf.13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
lol, i thought that was hilarious, that was awesome, i got so excited when i saw you had a new story, it's really cool, and creative as always.
i could really picture bella as she was with her long long hair, baggy jeans etc before the 'transformation' (i put that in inverted commas coz when i first read that i thought straight to human - vampire tranformation... even thoguh they're all human... lol) anyway i could really picture the shy bella into the sexy, short hair, provocative clothing Bella. and i love it how you always put pics on your profile, i love it, looking at what the author actually is imagining, i get all excited when i see something is on your profile, and that's the same with the other story of yours.
About that other story of yours, umm yeah i know you know that i love it, but anyway make sure you still continue that, whilst doing this.. lol multi-tasking, i know you can do it! lol, umm yeah just dont forget about your other amazing story, or i will be sad [.. haha, i know this won't happen, you just updated like yesterady or something! lol.. but back to THIS story...
'"Oh no. Oh no, no, no." My roommate wasn't present, but her wardrobe was.' LOL - haha, that's so typical Alice, i love it! the way you depict the characters is really awesome, and SO funny... hilarious, lol, i love your romance, humor stories, they're like THE perfect genre, for me. lol, i love them, and the style of ur writing, beautiful. hehe, and i also love the way you do different points of view, it really captures each character's personality well, and its more exciting than one POV, not that one pov is boring, just it seems more fun with different ones... and ur story is FUN FUN FUN. definition of fun: reading halojones's stories. :P ...
'Alice looked at her brother and said, "So much for pentagrams under my bed, huh Edward?" She then turned to me. "Wow, I"m Alice, And I don't know about you and me yet, but I think our haircuts are going to become fast friends!"' LOL - i could just copy and paste and just say LOL to all of them, every sentence is filled with humor, and im like laughing non-stop, it really makes my day lighter! and again with the, i think our haircuts are going to be best friends, lol typical Alice. where do you gget all these oringial, funny jokes from? your such a fab author!
Guys and the "s" word. hah. thats funny and the whole thing with the sexually active hair, and the virginal hair etc etc, they're so funny and creative, and the hiar whisperer hahaha. lol, your like my dream author! hehe.
and 'We'll get along swimmingly' heehe, that just in it's self sounds hilarious, i dont know it just does. haha im laughing and shaking my head at the moment.. just the 'swimmingly' is just hilarious to me.. hehehehhe
oh and i think the way you have manipulated, shaped the shy bella into the bold, out-there Bella fitted perfectly, you can still picture Bella, but in a new kinda way and it fits the story well,(long pause) to (too said with a mysterious kind of hm tone) well. *raises eyebrow, the detective kind of face after he says, 'it all fits, this is easy.. too easy.' lol, ok random, but yeah maybe your like Stephenie Meyer! haha, no. lol but maybe your some alien monster trying to take over the world by capturing the minds of innocent little people reading fanfiction then controlling and making them kill everyone haha, ok, no i THINK your human. maybe. hehehe ok wateva.
oh and i no im going bac and forth over the chapter, but i just write the things that pop out in my mind that stand out, well the whole story stands out for me but anywho.. back to the line (which i thought was:
a) hilarious, LOL
b) very Alice-like
c) awesome. )
the line, '"I"ve always taught my clothes and shoes to be tolerant of others. We really champion diversity and multiculturalism."' - hahahahahahahaha lol. LOL LOL diversity and multiculturalism, this personification, is like THE best personification i have ever heard it it's that was awesome. } ] -haha look i grew a moustache. ] look i just shaved. hahaha, im a girl so i cant really have a mosutahce... but anyway im a bit high. D i dont know wat the fuk that had to do with the story... *rasises eyebrow* maybe, you the alien monster knows? hehe, ill stop with that... sometime.
but yeah... awesome stories. both of them. ]
In fact i have a word that perfectly describes you and your awesome stories: ALIEN LIKE! no wait, ALIEN-MONSTER-LIKE (look its hyphenated.. so it IS still one word, wow im a genius. lol) no but really the word:
err well the 'BEST' ccomes close but i think that this word serves the purpose a lil better:
haha, do you like? hehehehe well i think i should probably go do something other than oogling over your stories. hehehe, not that i mind,well i do feel a lil guilty not doing something other than staring at the computer, typing away. lol. butsee this is part of ur alien-monster plan, to capture me, so now im in the control, and then you put subliminal messages in your stories making me doing what you want and im obeying, see like now, maybe you put in a message: LONG REVIEW. or SRS. (short reviews suck.) lool, hehehehehe wel then, maybe i should start to think for myself and leave you to write the next chapters, maybe. yes, now you say, gnol tub ton oot gonl sweiever. haha , lol it was all backwards btw...,
anyway yeah, good bye for now.
-Until next chapter, update whatever,
Your Faithful Reviewer. (in fact ill just abbreviate that to YFR lol k) so TAKE 2.
- -Until next update,
P.S. LOL. yes ok... bye then. ] ...mm hm. oh and i forgot to put, yes i know staing the obviousbut nevertheless, CAN'T WAIT TIL NEXT CHAPTERR! (in both stories, lol!)
xx actually in fact you deserve an EXTRA x. whoa dude, never ever have i done that to someone on fanfic. ok
- -Until next chapter, that i eagerly await,
Good bye, Good morning, Good afternoon, Good night (i dont know wat time it is...) BYE.
P.S.2. lol wow magical extra x. hehe OK i wil go now. and do something, in fact i need to go to the toilet. hehehehe, ok then goodbye. bye. xx. (dont get greedy, you already got ur extra x. ] )
| spammy chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Really good so far. Update soon please :D
| Michelle62092 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
pretty good :D
please update soon!:D :D
| extinction is forever Dx chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
nice! personally...i'd prefer if you didn't have jacob/james/emmett as competition for this story...but hey its a good plot. (well at least dont include jacob! please!)
and wheres rosalie? is she going to be in this story?
also update your other story! (10 steps to seducing your hot virgin bf!)
| xolj77xo chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
i love it. its hilarious!
| stavanger1 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I like it, I/m curiouse to see where this goes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
| xJAYx chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I never thought I'd read a bold Bella. But hey, it worked! I'm enjoying both your stories thoroughly. UPdate soon eventhough you did update today :P Still- update soon!