|Reviews for One Last Try|
| ripper34 chapter 15 . 9/28/2013
good story to bad your not going to update
| jil chapter 15 . 9/8/2013
Please update soon.
| Shyfire chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
'best magical school in England' - this particular magical school is in Scotland. Also, he sat in his office, not sate.
this review for chapter 12: Intermission.
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/27/2013
U put 4 2x
| laraquick chapter 15 . 8/20/2013
I reached the final chapter of the story and was disappointed to learn that you are leaving HP fandom. I think that's a shame because the writing was bizzarely humorous and I think your sarcastic Snape and Harry POVs made what could have been another angsty story a treat to read. I was hoping that one of the Loonies would have given Hermione the verbal support for her insecurity as to their friendship. For her, actions can be deceptive ... she needs the reassurance of words.
| TLJ110166 chapter 7 . 8/19/2013
were looking at him with an adoring/merry/far away look/(scary) expression on their faces. Error corrected. Please continue this story! I love how Harry and company are driving Snape to drink!
| DennSedai chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
*evil cackle fit* Poor Severus... I fear he's going to have a nervous breakdown before long... let alone what the other teachers will suffer.
| Corwalch chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
I have only one observation to make regarding Luna. She came in the same year Ginny did , so she shouldn't be on the train with Harry for his first year.
| alemery chapter 15 . 5/2/2013
You are cruel, unusual and utterly AWESOME! Pity you won't write.
| GinHanelle chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
Darn. I loved this story. Let me just go cry in a corner since you have lost interest :( Lol, but anyway, I enjoyed what I read so thank you for sharing :D
| DarkenedRose24 chapter 15 . 2/19/2013
-dies laughing- this fic is bloody brilliant! -grins- can't wait for the next chapter!
| Keena3105 chapter 15 . 1/1/2013
please update again... :(
| AnnAisu chapter 14 . 12/23/2012
You left/are leaving the Harry Potter fandom? Nooooooooooo! Nooooooo! I wanted to see more...read more...be entertained by your quick wit more! Please please please? At least tell us if Harry slept with Snape (yes?) and how Christmas will go...please?
| Joy Whitlock chapter 15 . 11/24/2012
Sleep...what a lovely concept. Great story!
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 14 . 11/4/2012
I hate Ron
Would you have me suggesting Ronald-Dolores pairing?
"Slytherin." Both of them responded at the same time.
Ravens, unfortunately, bullied Luna. And Griffins are morons.
I asked Severus if I owned any of the characters in Harry Potter. He merely raised an eyebrow at me before going to find Harry to tell him the last stupidity I uttered. I don't own Harry Potter… sniff
Funny... Don't cry. Look on the bright side: you can write fanfiction about the HP universe!
The bell is sounding, round two is starting.
This time they'll be the ones left crying.
Beauty of the change in the air is flying...
Snape looked as though Bellatrix had just said something sane. This is going to be fun.
Draco had been so distressed that his eyes had shined.
Tears of laughter...
Harry was disturbed to notice that the voice lacked its usual cutting quality; he was even more disturbed upon becoming aware that he was worrying for the man he loathed throughout his school days.
I am now thinking about possibility of using a pointed quill as a deadly projectile.
Luna sitting cross-legged on her broom, in a bizarre feat of balance, eyes unfocused.
Though it was true that the boy was obvious to his surrounding, the sharp pain in the strangely old eyes forbid Snape from deluding himself on the matter of his charge's state of consciousness.
Remembering the past?
I should probably add that I don't condone excessive drinking. Harry, Draco and Snape are messed up. I think wars mess up good people.
Good day, good night, and good luck, Draco, Harry, Hermione, Luna, Severus.