Reviews for Year of the Spark: March 29
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Dear Author

Interesting oneshot, though there were mature themes woven in.

The quality is pretty good; good narration, dialog, drama, character interactions and reactions.

Elizabeth Weir and Vala Maldoran are very in character and full of depth (boy, Vala needs to learn restraint on compulsions).

The basic story was amusing, though certain details were dubious.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The langauge is clean.

The sexual references are vague, thus not offensive. THANK YOU.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker
Carrie O'Neal chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
roofl awesome story! I havent laughed because of a FF like that in a long time... really great work here! :D i'm soo looking forward to the sequel :D
Lady Lemons chapter 1 . 3/31/2008

odles and odles of fun!

Thanks for making me laugh out loud.

xfirefly9x chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
He! So much adorableness and funny in this! :D

I hope there'll be more?
Space1Traveler chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
This is going to be good. Can't wait until the sequel. Okay, yes I can, but step on it!
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I love it!
Sweet Cocoa chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Great Story! That was so funny and they were totally in character! Sequel Please! :)
Stargatecrazy chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I don't think they were OOC at all. Vala especially! Gotta love her! lol

I so can't wait for more! *is excited*

Charmed225 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Heh heh heh! Love it! :) Didn't seem out of character at all, either! Very good, and I hope you write that sequel soon! :)
Miss Pookamonga chapter 1 . 3/29/2008


That was incredibly HILARIOUS! I can actually see that conversation taking place...Vala was so IC, and I thought Liz was too, given her awkwardness regarding the "gossip". One of the greatest awkward conversations ever ;D Great job!


Miss Pookamonga :-P
nogigglingmajor chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
oh, oh, oh! Is this going to have another chapter? Please...I'll pull a Vala if there's not!
Steph7085 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
O...this made me giggle. Typical Vala :)
between the waves chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
*g* The best news I've heard all day is that you're gonna continue this, hehe.

That was priceless. And man, Elizabeth and Vala are two of my absolute favorite people, so I had to love this.

“When you both go insane from lack of sex, don’t come complaining to me.”
iHeartYou13 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
hehe i like
sparklyshimmer2010 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
HAHA! Myriad that was great, very funny. i loved it, loved Vala and now i cant wait til your next day! :D
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