Reviews for Just Business
The Book of Eli chapter 20 . 9/25/2014
This was a good read.
CodelyokoFan23 chapter 7 . 6/11/2010
wow, that was a part from the novel hanible rising, excelent job
dog youkai jane chapter 20 . 4/27/2008
Ack! NO! Why'd you kill his children?
Phoenix Vengeance chapter 20 . 4/21/2008
That was a really great story Oracle and I hope you make many more. I've definitely enjoyed reading this.

From the looks of it you could continue on with a sequel. Sorry I haven't reviewed lately but I've had a few school problems.

I look forward to more.

PV
Alucard 1024 chapter 20 . 4/21/2008
Great story! Are you going to make a second part or anything? I really hope so!
dog youkai jane chapter 16 . 4/18/2008
Wow. Poor Ellipsis and Ki'oli. Up-date soon.
Alucard 1024 chapter 16 . 4/15/2008
Great chapter! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
Kaimaler chapter 12 . 4/11/2008
Man that's good stuff! I wonder if Snake-Eater braved to tell Eilipsis about Hitachi?

Besides the point, dang good story so far Oracle, keep them coming!
Alucard 1024 chapter 12 . 4/10/2008
Wow! Am I loving this story! Please keep up with the updates, I really want to see what happens next!
Phoenix Vengeance chapter 8 . 4/5/2008
Another three great chapter's to your story. It's getting more interesting and mysterious as you go along making you second guess what's going on and what will happen.

Looking forward to more of this.

PV
Phoenix Vengeance chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Love the story. Very original, never seen one like this before adding another twist to the life of Predators beside just hunting and honour.

Absolutely loved it when you made one of the Predaliens smart showing the blending of the two species could create them as a psychotic creature or as an intelligent being.

Keep up the good work.

PV