|Reviews for The Bookworm and the Beast|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/1
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/1
yeah i am a vampir. walking in broad daylight and not burning up...
| hyperjudgement chapter 26 . 1/16
This was a pretty good fanfiction, even though some elements of it were shallow or cliche. I would suggest rearranging the chapters or writing notes, because there is some confusion with the Break Up since it was the last chapter you published. Also there were some little grammar errors, although I doubt that really matters to you at this point.
| Aquaz dewdrops chapter 30 . 1/16
Really AWESOME fanfic. :D but they got back together, right?
| Ayarin chapter 30 . 1/14
Nice story TTwTT
| Kiki1770 chapter 30 . 1/12
That was an awesome story, I sort of skimmed over everything that happened after the epilouge but I liked it alot anyway. I liked the realism in this story, though lot of times I kept wishing for something dramatic to happen, I'm glad it went the way you planned. I really like the Natsume in the story, the whole "Can we skip the feelings and just make out" thing was so cute. I felt like Mikan's character was a bit off but I haven't found a fic where Mikan was close to the way she was in the manga. A lot of the Mikan's in the Fanfics are actually similar to yours. Maybe it's just me, but Mikan didn't really strike me as the sort of person to have major temper. I'm definietly NOT critizing you, I just noticed in the fanfics (a lot of them) she has a temper problem.
But anywho thank you for writing such an awesome story
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
This is so good keep it up!
| TheNewBlueMoon chapter 30 . 11/9/2013
this was just too awesome. I loved it. The whole entire story in fact.
| Guest chapter 30 . 10/21/2013
I really didn't like this story. I found it utterly meaningless and confusing.. -_-
Sorry for being so blunt but I've much better stories than this.
Good attempt though..
| Red Bakagami chapter 26 . 9/21/2013
Don't thank your readers for reading your story for long hours. Instead, we should thank YOU for creating this masterpiec GDI I DIED READING THIS XD GREAT JOB!
| quinn chapter 26 . 9/17/2013
I really suggest changing the order of the chapters to stop the flow of hate mail from fans under the impression that the story ends with the two breaking up. xD
Anyway, lovely story, I like how you don't follow the unspoken cliches of the protagonists being the two main characters in a play that also magically coincidentally mirrors their circumstances. This was refreshing.
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/14/2013
That was a shitty ending. Whatever I never even liked your story.
| Evreia safes metopo tis chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Your story is really well put together.
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
This has got to be the best GA fanfic I have ever read. The feels I got when I read your story! I felt like I was reading a book. You made me feel like I was actually experiencing the story itself. I spent a total 3 days reading your story. No, I'm not a slow reader. I just wanted to save every chapter because it was so good! I even pulled an all nighter the first time I found your story. I think you have a real talent! I hope that you write more stories to share with us because I'm in love with this one! Thank you so much for keeping me entertained during this boring summer!
| hakivah chapter 30 . 8/6/2013
the last time I read your story was the summer after 8th grade. I think those were the days where I read fanfction heavier than nowadays and I read much more than gakuen Alice. I delved a little bit into every manga and anime I had read or seen. because of that, they tended to blur together and while certain stories would stick out many of their little details that made specific stories unique would blur together.
that summer I also tried writing my own fanfiction but it never developed because my friend read it for me and the criticism put me out of commission. I was 13. what can you do really.
now, as a senior in high school I've revisited my gakuen Alice past. I'm not sure what sparked it. I finished reading the manga which was a surreal experience. then because I couldn't let that flame of emotion and respect and other good feelings die out, I spent 3 days rewatching it while going through the gakuen Alice tumblr tag. and I found links to recommended stories. and then I found a link to this story.
and I remembered it.
how I read it on my phone during my family vacation the summer before freshman year. ( I don't think it was finishe back then) now , three years later I lay awake in my condo on another family vacation and I've just finished tbatb
Like my familiar to write my own fanfiction would indicate, I couldn't begin to encapsulate my gratitude to you about your story. I noticed you stuck with it for three years which is incredible to me. (three years ironically being the amount of time it's been since I've given up writing)
your story was incredible. I may not be a writer, but I recognize that you have a voice, which is so unique that I remembered it through the 3 year haze of neglect when I saw your story on a gakuen Alice tag on tumblr at 3 in the morning and decided to re read this story.
I'm so sentimentally attached to Mikan an natsume it's absurd. when authors leave the site to pursue whatever their passions are, I regret that I'll never see another creative story but am also happy that I had even the chance to witness their creations bloom. it's been 2 years since you finished this story, but it's effect has me realing. I hope that you see this review because this story has been such an incredible experience for me I was to hug you and cry and find out how you're doing in life and I wish you the best wherever you go. you've given me a carthatic re-entering into the gakuen alice ffn after a 3 year 'hiatus' from reading. god bless you god bless this story I hope you have an amazing life.