Reviews for Interludes
tmnt 204 chapter 7 . 7/9
"the very center of her, urging her to a place where individual senses blurred and pure sensation took over." he means her crotch right? because this just keeps getting interesting
tmnt 204 chapter 8 . 7/3
YAS MORE, MORE! I CRAVE IT! O.o I am so dirty
Firebird Scratches chapter 8 . 2/8
D'awwwwww! So cuuuuuuuute! X3
Guest chapter 8 . 4/6/2014
Just wanted to say I literally LOVE all your raph x april fanfics. They are my favourite tmnt couple and the way you write about them... Wow! I hope you go on with them. :*
PS: sorry if there are any mistakes, I don't speak English
sophie16 chapter 8 . 3/17/2014
Awesome, loved it!
Queequegg chapter 7 . 9/26/2013
I absolutely adore the way Raph reacts to the L word. It really gives his character so much depth. And really shows just how much he actually does care for April. So so sweet.

And one day I will draw the bath scene of Raph sitting there looking unimpressed. :)
Queequegg chapter 6 . 9/26/2013
"It's a little like rocket science" hahahaha ha BEST LINE EVER!
Queequegg chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
I loved this! The steamy part was incredible and Raph being jealous was so sweet. Seriously love this.
Queequegg chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
I am guilty of reading this whole story twice w/I reviewing. So I'm stopping by to tell you how much I loved it! I've always liked the idea of April/Raph, but this made me LOVE them!

Their emotions and nervousness in this scene are perfect. And I like that you didn't make a 20 something mutant virgin some kind if sex god. We all remember how intimidating the first time was and I imagine it would be way worse for him!
AnjuUchiha chapter 8 . 5/18/2013
Wow! I was a Donatello/April fan but now i am so Raphael/April!
meru-chan chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
i loved it. It was sweet and cute and charming and a real honest look into their relationship. Loved it. Would love to see a chapter centered more around spring...(hint hint)but it's awesome regardless.
MalibuShaggy chapter 8 . 6/15/2012
A wonderful chapter that made me laugh. I really enjoy the interaction between the two.
princessebee chapter 8 . 11/18/2011
You know, as much as I advocate for the Turtles having love/sex lives, whether with humans, other mutants or aliens... I admit I feel a bit awkward when it comes to the outright reading (much less writing!) of such intimate activities... but I overcame my blushings to read this fic and I'm very glad I did... once again for those thrillingly fabulous character moments, of the genuine development of a relationship... it's all so wonderful. Though in keeping with my unexpected prudery, chapter 5 is my fave! ;)
I Love Kittens too chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Nice portraying of Raphael. I'm glad that you did him with no experience on intimate relationships. Regardless,he's a mutant; he's also a virgin (I think, according to Bound, the boys just past their teenage years and now they in their early '20's right?)so this his first time and it's nice that April is giving him confidence.
OMG chapter 8 . 12/30/2010
Your best chapter ever! I love it! Just pure awesomeness lol

You're an absolutely amazing writer! :)

I look forward to reading the next chapter! :)
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