|Reviews for Super Smash Bros Fight for Hope|
| Gravy chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Looks too much like your reading a game guide, not a story.
I suggest you include things like trophication, more detailed descriptions of the characters (Perhaps where they are from for those that don't know who they are.), and more insight as to the thoughts of the characters via describing them.
It's not bad, but not good. High point is that your "story" isn't some random crossover.
| Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
The chapters are too short, but the concept is promising. Good work.