Reviews for Come Back To Me
nleslie chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
That was really well done. I can totally understand the flashbacks: just like in the Blackbird scene. I love how Jude is his medicine. Jude brings him back.

A couple wording errors, like 'too' instead of 'to'.

eg: 'I'll try not too..."

It's 'I'll try not to..."

Etc etc.

But it was very good, I liked it a lot. :)
ArraMidnight chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
oh this is such a sweet story. I am so favoriting it there should be so much more of this couple!
thinkyouneedtosmile chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
This was really good! Your story made it seem more believable of them being together. When I saw this, I'm like.. Max and Jude? No. But this made it seem like it could happen. Is this just a one-shot or are you writing more? I think you should continue ] But anyways, great job!
beautiful dreamere chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
so cute! max and jude sohould have ended up togeher in the movie, and to heck with lucy. lol
SiriusLovesRent chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Oh wow, that was quite amazing.

Max and Jude are so very adorable.

Wonderful, wonderful.

I loved the thing where they were fighting over who steals the blankets.

And the last line, with the "I love you" thing.


Loved it.

You're a very good writer.
amatorius48 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
well for not being a writer, you're awesome. I liked how Max didn't break down five seconds into the story, and how he felt embarrassed, That made it more real. I'd say during the beginning there were a few spots that could have used some comas, but besides that I can't think of anything constructive to say. :D

I really liked it.