|Reviews for The Johto Adventure: Crystal and Jimmy|
| Moonspots chapter 5 . 2/22
Your story is really good. I can't help but smile when I read it. I surprisingly really like both Jimmy's and crystals personalities. Keep it up!
| jayfeather12345 chapter 91 . 12/16/2013
I love this story! I love how you're developing Crystal's and Jimmy's relationship slowly and thoroughly, and also realistically. I really hope you update soon!
| hydro-serpent58 chapter 91 . 12/13/2013
Hey there, it's been a LONG time since we last talked. xD
In case you forgot, (which considering how long it's been, you probably have...) but I'm the person who gave you Ellen and Nellie, and I have to say, watching you pull their strings has been an enjoyment. :)
On another note I can only imagine how difficult it is with all the OCs you have to put in and what not. Keeping track is no easy feat, so kudos to you. ;) Anyways, you're right. It's going to be tedious to show EVERY character but...it would be nice. But if it drags on too long that would be bad too...hm. Well, depending on how many coordinators you have just multiple them times 3 for each round and you'll have the number of times you require inspiration...which might be over a dozen. If you need help I could give some suggestions but it may take away from the mystery so... *shrug* You're call.
At any rate, it's great to have you back. :) I bet you never imagined you'd have 91 chapters huh? There's gotta be a party when you reach 100.
hydro-serpent58 a.k.a. Kari
| BattleWithYourHeart chapter 91 . 12/8/2013
Ooohh great chapter! I'm loving this contest already! I wouldn't mind seeing all of the appeals, but it's your choice :)
I'm also curious to know what's happening with the rangers and with Silver!
Once again, amazing chapter! :)
| MariiKo chapter 91 . 12/8/2013
Update! Finally! Thank you for the nice chapter :) It was great :) I hope you can update soon
| reganhp19 chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
I have a question, what is an oc?
| reganhp19 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Name: Shuo (pronounced shoo-oh)
Pokemon: Oshawot, torchic,gyrados( idk if that's legendary or how to spell it),zigzagoon,magikarp :P
Appearance: light brown hair, purple eyes :P, red shirt,jeans, and blue shoes
Where does HE appear: In a random battle with jimmy, as a cocky challenger with a lot of money
Love interest: little girls :P( just kidding, no one)
Other:has 2 badges
| Chaison chapter 91 . 12/7/2013
Want you to know that I'm still a huge fan. You got me into fanfiction and I'm really happy you've included me like you have in your story.
On a side note. I vote that you show all the appeals :)
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 91 . 12/6/2013
Hey there! I'm glad to see you again. Yeah, writer's block is a pain...are you recovering well from that illness? I hope you do if you're not well yet! Happy Holidays! c:
Now I'm wondering who Silver's working for. ._.
| WyldClaw chapter 91 . 12/6/2013
oooh! the plot thickens!
I loved logan and ellen's appeals
| Ravenwing chapter 90 . 11/11/2013
Wow, good story, this is definitely one fic I would recommend. By the way, what age are Jimmy and Crystal, they seem a bit inconsistent.
| Pokesupefan0601 chapter 87 . 10/24/2013
| Pokesupefan0601 chapter 86 . 10/24/2013
Proton killed Archie!
| Ketchum Kid chapter 90 . 6/13/2013
Personally, I like the customization the best, but I find it troubling that they have said they still haven't figured out how to transfer data from the fifth generation to X and Y. I know that they'll probably figure it out, but still...
Another good chapter here. Can't wait to see what the Pokemon Rangers bring to the table. Here's to the next chapter.
| OcarinaPkmnGirl chapter 90 . 6/7/2013
Yay! Another chapter of The Johto Adventures! I love this story…then again, I love all of your stories! You're talented and don't you forget it! -high-fives-you- Keep up the epic work!
Anyway, it seems to me like Jimmy is maturing a little bit, he can cool down a little faster, which is really good! I liked the interaction between Silver and Chrystal, it was really interesting. I really loved how you characterized Silver, Jimmy and Chrystal in general, they have such distinct personalities. Oh, and Rangers are so cool, aren't they?
Just a correction––'She just remembered that She realized that she had several missed calls.' You should've shortened it to, 'She realized that she had several missed calls.'
Anyway, IKR? Panda Pokemon for the win! Definitely gonna catch that one when Pokemon X and Pokemon Y comes out!