Reviews for Final Moments
phoebe101 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
this is a good story. To make it better, you could make it a last chapter to a longer story explaning how Francine got on to drugs in the first place and her confersations with her dad. Loved how she called him daddy, it makes it more dramatic... The four seasons are my favorite band and listening to jeff sing fallen angel made me cry for the first time in a book, movie or song. I love your story
JerseyGirlPatzie chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I love this story. I wish it was longer, explored Francine and her story more- you could do it so well. the last line when she's calling for her Daddy is heart breaking!

can't believe no one's said how great this is before!