Reviews for The End of the Road
Winter Blake chapter 5 . 2/23/2010
LMFAO

Hilarious, I love it!
Robin G. Fellow chapter 5 . 10/10/2009
1. Zeus runs off with another woman.

2. Hera gets pissed and busts in in all her angry goddess glory

3. Zeus sweet talks (grovels) Hera into taking him back

It's sad how much this happens.

Poor Julie.

Overall, this was a great story. I love how you did it through Artemis' point of view. That way, the reader knows what's going on and there's a link between writer and reader. She was in character-as were Zeus, Hera, and Apollo- and you can still see the ancient goddess despite the changes brought by time.
Robin G. Fellow chapter 4 . 10/10/2009
The story's realistic. In modern times, the Greek gods probably would be out of shape unless they worked out regularly at the gym or something.

I really like how Hera just busts in there in all her angry glory. Very dramatic.
Robin G. Fellow chapter 3 . 10/10/2009
And the plot thickens...

I'm loving this story so far. It's a nice concept-how the Greek gods would cope with modern times if they were real-and you do a good job.
Robin G. Fellow chapter 2 . 10/10/2009
Poor Artemis. Kicked out from her bed and having to deal with Apollo's snoring all night.
Robin G. Fellow chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Oh Apollo...no one believes in Greek gods anymore!

Poor guy. It was still a funny scene though.
Own.Little.World chapter 5 . 9/27/2008
This is very good! Update soon! I love your description and Artemis' attitude. HAHAA Apollo!
Hanneli chapter 5 . 9/20/2008
Great work with this story!
Fishy Rainboots chapter 5 . 7/10/2008
Veyr interesting. I enjoyed it.
mrmistoffelees chapter 5 . 6/3/2008
Interesting story so far...keep it up!
UN PHARMACHIEN chapter 5 . 5/22/2008
I love it! Jill Frost. . . heh. .

I think it is well-written, though there are a few tense issues; nothing much.

Did i already metion i love it?