Reviews for Time, Mr Potter?
LAB1 chapter 35 . 4/9
This story was very well written, and I would not have picked up that you were a teen when writing it! It was very realistic for fiction and a bit too graphic for me during the fight scenes. I admit to skimming a bit for the sake of my mental health. It was just a bit much for my sensitive sensibilities. You did classify this story as horror, so I was forewarned! The plot while dark was well thought out and executed! You have a lot of skill as a writer!
Kapteyn34 chapter 3 . 3/12
Terrible.
yousef chapter 35 . 1/1
absolutely incredible story. id love to read more of your stories and i hope you got hella success.
jormander2012 chapter 29 . 2/12/2023
story was okay until you made him an inferni then it just got super dumb super quick to the point I honestly lost all interest in the rest.
thatemomathkid chapter 10 . 2/9/2023
Your writing is so good. The way you use words is truly artistic, and your action scenes are fantastic. I’m loving the story so far.

Ps: oml the ministry is INFURIATING
Gazuzin chapter 35 . 1/17/2023
Very nice action scenes, like the attack on the Ministry, even though its hard to imagine Voldie fighting in close combat. Super Inferius Harry was fun, what a beast. Thanks for writing
LastDescendentOfSlytherin chapter 35 . 1/4/2023
loved it!
slight complaint though, I hate time jumps (in any story)
great job!
wiebenor chapter 35 . 12/25/2022
Good story, I must say, although I think I'd have preferred to have more information about Harry recounting his life story to Ron and Hermione in the last chapter, y'know, to get their reactions to things he, or Dumbledore, for whatever reason, did... Aside from that, I can immediately think of a way to give Harry a body that doesn't require the rebirthing ritual. How else could Harry be reborn, you may ask? Well, Voldemort did make a deal with the devil, and honestly, I expected when he finally died, for the demon to show up and take voldemort's soul, if not his body also, to hell, and although that technically happened if I understand the plot correctly, no demon showed up, his soul just disappeared to hell or wherever, BUT, IF the demon did show up to pick Voldemort up, he could easily thank Harry by making him a body for his soul to go into, or better yet, have one ready to go, then just preform the move for him and take voldemort's soul and leave... Or even if not a demon giving him a body, an angel could be worked into the plot as well... As I say though, I have no problem with the story, it's just an observation I made that could easily make the last few chapters slightly different...

Again, love the story, and I'm not surprised he got his body back in the end, although I am surprised at how he did it... I must tell the author Good Job
csheila chapter 19 . 12/24/2022
Great battle scenes. I love Harry’s attitude
csheila chapter 17 . 12/22/2022
Yes, how you handle rural terrorists
csheila chapter 16 . 12/22/2022
Well done

But split identities rarely hold

Still, the whole premise of the teens searching for the horocruxes was silly
csheila chapter 15 . 12/22/2022
Great

They never should have sent the students there
csheila chapter 14 . 12/22/2022
Bloody but fair.

People die in war, especially innocent civilians
csheila chapter 13 . 12/22/2022
I hear the Good, Bad and Ugly music
csheila chapter 12 . 12/22/2022
He could just kill them all now

But it wouldn’t make much of a story.
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