Reviews for A Lesson in Teamwork
Future In Chaos chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
loved it! i hope you write more stories with this pairing
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
How cute! X3 Sasori is such an old man! :D Deidara learns to respect!
Rebel-Darkness chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
Strange,

rough,

barbaric,... in a steamy hot mansexual way...

I like it, un. I like it alot.
Serena6686 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
nice
Okarilia chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
oh hell... that was sick!

... yes! that was sasori at 100%!

the most credible sasodei I ever read!

yeah! xD

sayonara!
Ninjashallow chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
hm hot hot hot! and really well written, great Job!
ForForever chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Yay! I loved it! :D

And I'm so glad you used Master instead of Danna 'cuz then I would've been reminded of one of my friends. :D

And I'm glad that you didn't introduce Japanese words into an English fanfic like other authors.

:D
TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Yummy! XD
UchihaJIS chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
woah.. awesome oneshot
Iria chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Smexy XD
Hibari Kyoya chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Greatest. SasoDei. Story. EVER! You should write more SasoDei things. You have a natural gift for them.
Mamma Mia chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Epic win. ~Only downside was "un" instead of "yeah" since you used "Master" instead of "Danna"~ I thought it was a bit inconsistent of you. (Not that most authors don't do that, but it's always been one of my pet peeves).
HowG chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
The most realistic Akatsuki fic ever.
Keys chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I think you're a really good writer. I'm not much into the other pairings you write though, so I apologize for not reading those stories. But I loved this story, it was so descriptive. You're amazing with details. You also analyze things very good too.
Anglique chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
That is so believable.
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