|Reviews for Eye of Genesis|
| Raj8 chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
This is a great story I love it I hope you update soon.
| LunarCatNinja chapter 5 . 6/19/2010
LOVE it, and I hope you update soon! W
| ragnrock kyuubi chapter 5 . 2/18/2010
great story hope to read more chapters soon
| YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
| ABitterPill chapter 5 . 11/13/2009
This story is interesting as well.. I am curious, why did you choose Madara as the bearer of the other eye? I wonder if Naruto's eye had existed before in the Shodai Hokage... Hmm..
I also noticed a typo early on in the chapter: "Everyone in the clearing felt a shiver run down their spine, a boy like Naruto giggling at the thought of mutilating someone was something that scared everyone in the room."
Note that last word. "Room" I believe everyone is actually outside at the time, in the Forest of Death.
If the Souseiki no Me is the Eye of Genesis, the Eye of Life, I would think it would clash badly with Kyuubi's Youki, not unlike if the Keiji no Me were in the same body.
I wonder, will Naruto be growing those tails permanently within the stated 3 weeks? That's certainly not gonna help his popularity in Konoha any.
Ah well, I do hope you decide to continue this story some day, but It would seem you have your hands full with many others as well.
| Seraphine Sky chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
brilliant, your story is really exciting! cant wait for the next chapter!
| Dea7hly Jes7er chapter 5 . 12/15/2008
wow all the suspense over the pairing and its just another crappy NaruHina way to go hope it works out for you becuase now i've last a;; interest in this story.
| Dea7hly Jes7er chapter 2 . 12/15/2008
Dude WTF does Naruto have Mpd because last chapter(Chap 1) he was all cold and shit and now in chap 2 hes back to being a pansy ass retard WTF is up with that!
| Raven Marcus chapter 5 . 12/11/2008
That is pretty good! I like it! Please write more!
| Ryuuki no Koukon chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
Insane naruto reminded me of Garra
| MastermindZangetsu99 chapter 5 . 11/17/2008
awesome as hell.. plz update this one quickly
| NarutoNamikaze1 chapter 2 . 11/16/2008
im the funny kid with the curly her LOL make garra say that
or temari LOL and let naruto get a kid like yondamie but in kid form
| kidcrud chapter 5 . 11/16/2008
| AmSidar chapter 5 . 11/16/2008
I like your story so far great idea whit the eyes...
Hinatas personality is a great touch to, even thought i think you should have given stronger reasons why she did not interfere whit Narutos life.
How she come to Naruto before the 2nd exam you suggest that she to wears a mask. ;)
BTW plz don't turn naruto into half demon, that's would go again the hole idea of your story.
Since i think demons would have negative mana so or so no mater if they are good or bad.
Great work, keep it up. :)
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 5 . 11/16/2008
Nice chapter, can't wait to see how Naruto fares against Kiba with a chakra restriction. I like how Naruto knows Kabuto isn't on his side, now four eyes will be in for an even bigger beating if Naruto catches him!