Reviews for Good Morning, Byakuya
lycheeBOBA chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Ukitake was a little out-of-character... o.o I LIKED that :D MUAHAHAHAHAHA
No, but seriously this was awesome
Willow Athena chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I think the story was written really well. It was funny and naughty and enticing all at the same time. I like the contrast of their pairing, most ppl dont do it as well as you, so I just wanted to say - YAY YOU! It would be really nice if you wrote more related to this story, or at least this pairing...its just that you do them so well while making them slightly different, but not out of character - its believable and thats why I thought it was good. Hope this is a helpful review- Im new to this.
regulus has a sense of humor chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I loved the way you ended it! Poor Byakuya... he had it comming though... I will admit I had my doubts seeing as this is aparently what my friend calls 'payback' for a ByakuyaxIchigo lemon (please note that I do not ship this pairing under any circumstances) and since I only recieved the url taking me to the story, I originally thought the pairing would be something seriously obscene, like MayurixToushiro, or something like that. Obviously reading this proved me wrong (thank god) because even though I am not easily scarred, it probably would have taken me a good 5 minutes to get over that pairing.

It was a really good story, including two of my favorite Bleach characters, which made it that much better. :D

hatorimalfoy3
Vivienne Grainger chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
There is probably an entire psychology waiting to be written on why we love to discomfort Byakuya Kuchiki. Done very nicely here, with a good twist at the end.
CrumbleFierce chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Oh, I love this pairing and this story. xD I wasn't expecting that ending, very nice twist of events. And so random, which is brilliant. Kido bondage, how unique. xD
Nomannic chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Nice ending.

That was hilarrious.

I loved it. This pairing needs MUCH more love...
MewMidnight chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
LOL That was fantastic. This is probably one of my fave pairs, you did a great job. :3
Hiragime chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Poor Byakuya...and Ukitake having so much fun as usual xD

Heheh I loved it!
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
too funny ! I loved that one !
JeanThine chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I love random yaoi fics,

okay what I mainly see is good about this is you accomplish a great deal of the story telling through dialouge, which is necessary for both humour and romance, but what is especially important with romance fics is that there is adequete description through other means.

I won't lie, this is a punchline story. The "damn it all" at the end just made my evening. But it doesn't read like a punchline story. You can see it in some of the short stories of Issac Asimov that he gears the whole story towards a punchline at the end. But yours doesn't do that, which is good. The way to tell if you've 'punchlined' your story is see if it still makes sense if you take away that punchline.

I like your yaoi writing, I can't remember if I ever did any, probably should, anyway I'd like to see more like this, it's become clear in the manga now that Byakuya was not Ukitake's fukutaicho, but what the hell.

keep writing, I'll think of a solid request soon.

-JeanThine
Devatron2000 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
cute
flyingsnails chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
aw poor byukashi being left high and dry like that
KousukeAsazuki chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
XD, poor Byakuya. But this was entirely too much fun to read. I'm very glad yours was the first UkitakeByakuya I read, as I'm afraid others won't be so...well, good, to put it bluntly. Though Ukitake pouting was kind of...o.o. XD, but I still liked it very much.
judikickshiney chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Poor Byakuya. Evil, sexy Ukitake. I want one.

I also want that kido spell...just in case I get a ByaKUYA anytime soon...

Judi
miss-emotive chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Forgive this sudden rash of reviews from me, but after previewing your Dead Captain's Society story, I felt inclined to check out your other Bleach fanfics, and now I feel as though it were time very well invested after coming across this gem! Byakuya and Ukitake, with kidou bondage and playful trickery. I love it! It's very sexy and suggestive, but tastefully so, leave just enough to be imagined. It's very playful, and so very awesome, haha. Great job!
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