Reviews for Teasing
xiomara209 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
fiesty..
vanilfrappe chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Well, Bella and Edward certainly had fun, didn't they? (Female giggle that would really sound weird if it came out of my mouth...) Nice going!
EarthyGirl chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
That was really well done. Very true to the characters and sexy to read. I hope you will write some more!
nattarella chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Amazing.

I loved the choice of vocabulary and how everything flowed so smoothly.

Almost like the real thing!
MinniMuffin chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Very good. That was so hot!
Orasaka chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
That was hot.
snowror chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Well that was sexy :)

I loved it, keep writing please!
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