|Reviews for Helm, God of guardians|
| dark neko chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Please do more of this story, it's nice to see more stores about drow that aren't drizzt, so far it's really good please update soon
| Elise chapter 4 . 4/8/2012
Nice interesting cool fan-tastic story! I really would like to read on :) but thx for writing it anyways!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/29/2012
please continue your story, I have enjoyed what you have written. Does Drizzt get the girl in the end? lol
| Mreaca chapter 2 . 11/12/2010
The plot of this story is certainly different to most other Forgotten Realms fanfics. I for one am really wanting to know how it all turns out.
I also agree with Seekergirl Keaton, more people read longer stories because quite frankly an incomplete long story is more enjoyable than an incomplete short story. I've also noticed that
the stories with the most reviews are the enormously looooooong ones - so if you want lots of reviews, keep writing!
An observation here(please don't be offended) I did find the story slightly well, "stilted".I thought it felt a bit "rushed" - the scenes moved very quickly. Maybe some longer paragraphs would fix the "rushed" feeling?
If you keep writing I will certainly keep reading (and reviewing!)
| Yulandia chapter 3 . 11/7/2010
YES! Write more! :)
| Captian-Winter chapter 3 . 9/30/2010
Yes I will read it fi u wrote more
| Shraikor chapter 3 . 9/26/2010
| Lavinia chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
I would... definitely
| S. Ikeda chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
This story sounds intereseting. It would be nice to find out what happens. Don't give up on it if you really don't want to. Maybe more people will read your story if their are more chapters, as a longer story is more enticing and can show more promise than one with only 2 or so chapters.
| Lavinia Undead chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
Well... This sounds very promising... I really hope that you update, I'd love to find out how this turns out.
| RabbleRabbleRabble chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
interesting start to the story, plz continue to update! )