Reviews for “If I Touch You There”
Firediva0 chapter 1 . 3/25
You're a really good writer! I love this, and the only mistake I found was a missing work in the last three sentences. It was truly amazing, and I can't wait to read more from you!
yullenlover99 chapter 1 . 2/24
... nosebleed everywhere... need hospital...
LittleRaven chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Wow... I Think i Turned into a tomato after reading this... Oh ! And Awesome Work ! I can practically imagine it in my mind ... 0u0
xXBakandaAndMoyashiXx chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
*UNCONTROLLABLE SCHOOLGIRL GIGGLING* this was great.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Wow O.o was this really your first? It was so well written! It was absolutely AMAZING!
ReddWolf23 chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Holy, I just flooded my house with a nosebleed. That was hot!
kloveyaoi1 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Where are chapter's 2,3,&4?
Awesome. Though I wish Allen could be pregnant.
That'd be C&C (cute & cool)

n_n ,OoO, T-T
D.Gray Man chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I looooooooooove it!
fluffydragon1800 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Awesome story
jana chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Dude that was awesome! XD
HavenCraze chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
That was sooo hot. -giggles-
HoneyCaramelSwirl chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Daaw. this is too cute! xD The ending was so sweeeeet. :3 Very well written for your first smut fic. :P Keep writing!
Meryrequiem chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
hoshino is absually a woman
ShadowQueen1996 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
XD i loved this!...i think i recked my keyboard though 0.0 lol
chibi-neco chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
*nosebleed* OMG tHaT wAs HoT

nO nOt JuSt HoT mUcH mOrE

iT wAs..UgHt..CaN't EvEn FiNd ThE rIgHt WoRd...JuSt

LOVE IT

fUcKiNg AwEsOmE o
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