|Reviews for “If I Touch You There”|
| Firediva0 chapter 1 . 3/25
You're a really good writer! I love this, and the only mistake I found was a missing work in the last three sentences. It was truly amazing, and I can't wait to read more from you!
| yullenlover99 chapter 1 . 2/24
... nosebleed everywhere... need hospital...
| LittleRaven chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Wow... I Think i Turned into a tomato after reading this... Oh ! And Awesome Work ! I can practically imagine it in my mind ... 0u0
| xXBakandaAndMoyashiXx chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
*UNCONTROLLABLE SCHOOLGIRL GIGGLING* this was great.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Wow O.o was this really your first? It was so well written! It was absolutely AMAZING!
| ReddWolf23 chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Holy, I just flooded my house with a nosebleed. That was hot!
| kloveyaoi1 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Where are chapter's 2,3,&4?
Awesome. Though I wish Allen could be pregnant.
That'd be C&C (cute & cool)
n_n ,OoO, T-T
| D.Gray Man chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I looooooooooove it!
| fluffydragon1800 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
| jana chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Dude that was awesome! XD
| HavenCraze chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
That was sooo hot. -giggles-
| HoneyCaramelSwirl chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Daaw. this is too cute! xD The ending was so sweeeeet. :3 Very well written for your first smut fic. :P Keep writing!
| Meryrequiem chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
hoshino is absually a woman
| ShadowQueen1996 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
XD i loved this!...i think i recked my keyboard though 0.0 lol
| chibi-neco chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
*nosebleed* OMG tHaT wAs HoT
nO nOt JuSt HoT mUcH mOrE
iT wAs..UgHt..CaN't EvEn FiNd ThE rIgHt WoRd...JuSt
fUcKiNg AwEsOmE o