Reviews for Lungs of Steel
niamalfoyxxx chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Hi, I'm new at and I'm writing my first fic. It's called 'Addiction', it's a JennyDamien one. I love your writing style, I would love it if you could beta for me! I already have one beta but an extra pair of eyes would be brilliant. Check out my fic and tell me if it's any good. If it is (hopefully), please PM me so I can send you my requirements and the draft for my next chapter.

Thanks,
- Nia xxx
addisonkarev chapter 7 . 7/11/2009
Aw Dan and Blair serriously I love them together !
Josherz18 chapter 7 . 6/15/2009
Great so far. I really hope you decide to continue it, please.
Ain Relmi chapter 7 . 6/13/2009
I'm loving this. Update soon, please?
nostalgiakills chapter 7 . 4/17/2009
I really like all of your stories. They're so great.
Gift chapter 7 . 3/22/2009
I enjoyed the way you wrote the Blair and Dan dynamics, it is fun to read and the story is well put together. This is hoping that you read my review and continue writing this.
Ordinary Madness chapter 7 . 12/28/2008
OMG! I am totally and 100% in love with this story. I am BEGGING you to continue! It is SO good! Love it; love you.

Tinsley
slimkay chapter 7 . 12/26/2008
Extremely well-written story and compelling as well.

I really do hope you'll continue it, as it deserves to be continued, but also it's much more rare to find a great DB fic these days. :)
Dynodork chapter 7 . 11/28/2008
OMIGAWD! THIS IS THE BEST DAN X BLAIR STORY I'VE READ! THE CHARACTERS ARE NOT OC AND...WOW! BEST STORY! BRAVO!
stsword chapter 7 . 10/31/2008
Looking forward to more
MaDShiPPA chapter 7 . 10/20/2008
Please update soon!
Riri chapter 7 . 10/9/2008
I really hope you finish this story. I am very sorry you don't get more reviews, but if you would like, just drop me a message and I can critique all the chapters.

I think the first few chapters set the tone, pace and style of the story, so I would recommend you redo the first few, making the first chapter longer, fleshing out the premise of the summary and editing parts so that the prose would say exactly what you want the readers to understand. Think of the first chapter as a hook. It was too short to deliver that very witty summary.

I highly enjoyed this story. There is great potential and I hope you finish it. Because there just isn't enough Dan/Blair in the world.
kfrancis08 chapter 7 . 9/29/2008
that was amazing loved it continue plaease
fadedhometown chapter 7 . 9/28/2008
Really well written with some great technique, i enjoyed reading this a lot. Well done!
beanybabe24 chapter 7 . 9/6/2008
I loved this update. Can't wait to read your reason for why Blair and dan are the perfect couple. I was a bit upset that there was no Dan Blair interaction in the season premier. Oh well maybe next episode. U can't quit this story. I need my Dair fix. Pls.
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