|Reviews for Fire of the Fox|
| Yoholic chapter 11 . 12/11/2013
A excellent original story, i blazed through it in two readings. Hope you decide to continue this story some other time.
| mooman23 chapter 11 . 8/4/2013
This is pretty good. Normally I absolutely hate Naruto/Hinata pairings, but the way that they grow as ninjas, friends and lovers us believable and lacks a lot of the superfluous fluff that typically accompanies that pairing. I can kinda see your Tom Clancy influence in the story as well. I like how practical your descriptions sound for their movements, clothing, weapons, etc. Having to work through metaphors and similies kills my interest in some fanfics. The straight forward way you describe things gives a sense of urgency and increased pace for action scenes and makes us feel almost as bored as the characters do wheb performing mundane tasks without dwelling too much on it. Looking forward to your next update.
| Delrusant chapter 11 . 5/15/2013
pretty strange naruto fanfic, up until now it is written as if it was to be made safe against ennemies, all is hidden or covertly referenced, nothing is really known about the genin duo
the readers are nearly in the same position as the jounin trying to comprehend the mystery but lacking facts.
original fanfic all-around, darker than the manga and reaching toward "true ninja (stealth and cunning, "not there") " instead of "naruto ninja (flashy and talkative to satisfy the manga/anime format)"
| hiNAru Aburame chapter 11 . 4/1/2013
And... wow... i like your fic really much and i hope you continue soon... emmmm, please? xD
| Evci chapter 11 . 12/19/2012
More please !
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
Interesting story, please continue.
Btw there needs to be a "your IQ must be at least THIS HIGH" bar for 'reviews', judging from the drivel posted by incompetents like shnnypichu88 and Guest(10/25/2012) - hey idiots, if you don't like a story then why do you keep reading it? This happens in like every fanfic. I suppose since 50% of people are below the average IQ, statistically, they can't help it, but it would be better for them if they stuck to easier reading. Like Dolan or ragecomics. Oh well it wouldn't be without the babbling of retards in the background I suppose.
| Silver Flyer chapter 11 . 12/7/2012
Great so far. I will check in often for the next chapter. ;)
| shnnypichu88 chapter 11 . 11/28/2012
this story is bad... i have no idea whats going on, you should slow down and be more discriptive
| SneakyDaemon chapter 11 . 11/7/2012
This whole story has been very well written so far, looking forward to reading more.
| Q.Q chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
"Survival training begins in a half an hour, gentlemen. We leave for Mamoru at sixteen-hundred hours sharp!"
ladies and gentlemen?
otherwise good story :D
| Cerawitch chapter 11 . 10/30/2012
This is SUPER AWESOME!
I admit, while at the first chapter i wasn't very eager to continue reading the story. But i'm very glad i did.
The story is very complex and well written to the smallest detail. I absolutely love the plot.
Being a romance - genre reader, i've read a lot naruhina. I woul definitely say that the way you developed the closeness between them is different from what i have encountered. It was very refreshing! Although it was subtle, their small gesture of affection thrills me to no end! I keep reading the same line over and over again!
I hope you could update soon and have lots and lots of people to read your story!
| SilentSinger948 chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
I'm liking this fanfic.
| SilentSinger948 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Very interesting start.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 11 . 10/26/2012
I can't wait to see the results of Naruto and Hinata training with Anko as they take the exams.
| kryrsel chapter 11 . 10/25/2012
awesome chapter once again i really enjoy your work this chapter was a great way to relieve the stress of my day today