Reviews for The girl who wants Gohan
Ice Wolf17 chapter 2 . 12/20/2002
It's cool so far. Interesting plot, however... it is a bit confusing with the grammar errors and fast pace (but what can I say really? It's not like I don't have any grammar errors.) Otherwise, it is very good so far. Continue it soon. Keep on writing!
Archeo chapter 2 . 4/10/2002
That was very interesting. If you'd like to know what I think, you should type another chapter. Lots of people will want to read it.

-Mike-
Speed Duck formerly Erro chapter 1 . 11/10/2001
that was like the longest prolog of a story i have ever read.
Honey chapter 1 . 11/7/2001
That was extremely SHORT!
Last One Standing chapter 1 . 9/28/2001
Could be interesting in the future but the chapter is way too short.
Narcotic Dollie chapter 1 . 9/27/2001
Great start but that chapter wasn't long and you leaft me haggin...TYPE MORE!
Mercuriousity chapter 1 . 9/27/2001
I am interested in what will occur, so I am going to add you r story to my favories, to see if that will help.
someone chapter 1 . 9/27/2001
more and looooooooooooooooonger! :0
Teenager-Videl chapter 1 . 9/26/2001
Good start, I can't wait till the next chapter appears. _ Keep up the excellent work.