Reviews for Flying hearts
MaxRideRox chapter 11 . 4/20/2009
Wow...sorry to hear about all the stuff that happened...and I thought my life was bad...real sorry!

update when you feel like it!


Schuldtk chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
ok this is really good. i am not much of a reviewer so to speak so, just wanted to say keeping going cus i love it!
simkid chapter 9 . 7/8/2008
Happy bday i love the story
Den.of.Iniquity chapter 9 . 7/8/2008
Dude...sup man. I HATE THIS STORY DELETE IT! sorry major mood swings today...anyway i like it but be more descriptive.
indigenousbleu chapter 8 . 7/6/2008

i really like this story.

its a good plot but i think you should take your time and be more descriptive. when you change from day to day you should either have a line or some thing like


Serperating it. with those changes i think yur story will be brill :]
Den.of.Iniquity chapter 1 . 6/9/2008

CourtneyFirehand chapter 8 . 6/8/2008
How about "Fight for Lady Swan"?
TopazEyesx77 chapter 8 . 6/8/2008
ok little confused

name ideas Girls: jade amber kerri sam jesse alana melanie rachel


Boys: jack william jared dylan liam chris nathan
TopazEyesx77 chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
omg i loved it

i dont really understand what happened to rose though
TopazEyesx77 chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
i loved it
CourtneyFirehand chapter 7 . 6/5/2008
I give you a vitual hug for writing such a good story!
Natia chapter 5 . 6/5/2008
Well this story is...hard core...and i like it so please continue:)
lil-lostii chapter 5 . 5/23/2008
kool this is funny so nxt chap plz?
wolfgirl892 chapter 5 . 5/8/2008
cool story. write more soon.
I am Harry Cullen chapter 5 . 5/1/2008
that was great keep up the good work
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