Reviews for Amputated at the Neck
Akai-chan chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I just wanted to tell you that this is the most realistic and mature piece of writing I've ever seen pertaining to Bella and Edward's relationship. You sound like someone who truly knows what's going on in love and life experiences and I thank you for sharing that with the rest of us through Jasper.
newfoundlove chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
That was very interesting and very well written. I haven't read many stories of characters discussing Edward's short-comings, and he certainly has them, like anyone. The way that you described Bella and Edward's love is very true, especially before he leaves in NM. I think by Eclipse though, he may be loving Bella for who she is, not just the idea of her and the mystery that surrounds her, but that's just my take. Again, well done.
Sarah G chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
This was quite interesting. I always like finding Jasper based stories because I understand and there are so few tid bits about him.
Streaming Radiant Fire chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Wow...That was really, just wow. I kind of see where you thought, or Jasper thought, that Bella and Edward's love wasn't really as true as it could be. I think that Jasper does have a point, it like Edward and Bella have each other up in pedistools and neither one of them is awear of it. Anyway, this was a great story and I love the truthfulness in it rather than the fluff it could have been.
bemystar chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
that was really well written, so jasper-ish. nice job.
Ms. Topaz chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I love Jasper. He's so deep and insightful.

This was wonderful. Really. And I like how he's so concerned about Bella.
anon e mous chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
that was really good. just thought you should know.
CobhGirl3 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Very nice. Made me think...a lot. I can't get this essay out of my head. I've completely reevaluated the relationship between Edward and Bella because of your writings. And some of my own for that matter. Thank you. Please, write more. Your style and insights have captivated me.
Schattentaenzerin chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I LOVE your view of Bella/Edward. Ok, its not very dreamy but very realistic! Some of your (Jasper) thoughts are also my thoughts so i could understand him very good. :-)
Lynn chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Wow. That really was amazing. Jasper is my favorite character and the way you wrote him is astounding, its him to the letter in my opinion. The way you described Edward and Bella's relationship was really enlightening as well. I loved it.
dallasinwonderland chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
I enjoyed this so much. It really does make you think about Edward and Bellas relationship, although I would like to think that what they have is real true love and not some hero worship/obsession, the way that your Jasper sees (and feels) things would certainly make just as much if not more sense. Jasper also seemed very in character to me. Truly wonderful.
Panda Slippers chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Unbelievable! This is seriously amazing! Jaspers analysis of Edward seems to be really on-point. Words fail me as i try to describe the greatness of this fic - so i'm going to stop trying. Completely amazing though!
Bookflower chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Oh wow... I love your style of writing, and your Jasper is simply amazing... At the same time you raise some really interesting issues. This really is stunning!
xXxElianexXx chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
It's a good insight into what Jasper MIGHT be thinking- but to be honest he would NEVER doubt Edward's love for BElla, or vice versa. Apart from the fact that your opinion of what Jasper thinks is completely WRONG, it is good writing
purple.skivvy chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
I think you managed to capture the many facets of Jasper's character beautifully. I particularly liked the part about taking down the names of those people he had killed. It's very thoughtful of him. Well done!
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