Reviews for Amputated at the Neck
honeybeeze chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
wow, what a good, in depth look at Casper. Its realistic and true and strikes the reader at the heart (at least for me.)

I love how you explained love. Not what you think the person is but who they really are.

Beautifully done and thank you so much for writing :)
TwilightDisney556 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I'm really intrigued by this story. It is perhaps the most unique story I've ever read and it's very well done. I like it a lot. There is one thing I'd like to ask you though. During New Moon when Edward and Bella broke up, her entire opinion of Edward should've changed. She should've thought that he was just a liar and eventually gotten over him. However, she traveled halfway across the world to rescue him, with no thought about him being an incredible vampire but instead how the world would be wrong without HIM (the person) in it. Do you still think that's purely admiration. I'm not trying to pick a fight or anything, I'm just curious to know what you think. Anyway, in conclusion this was a great story and I love the telepath vs. empath debate. I'll definitely be reading more of your stuff soon! :)
EdwardsMate4ever chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Love this - I never thought about these things before - thank you for writing, and opening my eyes a little.
krjemb chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
As Jasper spent the lest amount of time with Bella he really has no idea of her experiences. They had maybe 2 conversations over the entire series. It's pretty presumptuous of him to think he knows nothing of her and her experiences.
CentauRita chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
My fav line...

'...I only care about that if I'm buying rice. In China. Otherwise, I'm more concerned about the price of rice in Forks - and not much then. I've never eaten rice in my life that I can recall, and it's a little late now.'

It's the 'Don't bother me unless it has to do with me' attitude and the humor about it been a little late to be thinking about buying and eating rice.

As to being a mind reader vs. empathic? I believe I would want to be like Jasper, empathic. I honestly know how someone feels would be a helpful tool in being able to help others.**You can't trust what someone is thinking.**
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I enjoy Jasper's "musings" and thoughts on things.

I think he's right, of course.

And you did a good job with it.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
that was very very interesting! Really enjoyed his perspective.
alphaladywolf chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
It's real. Love isn't flowery words and good looks. Love hurts, but in the end so worth it.
Jenarla xXx chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Food for thought.

That was such a fresh and interesting way to look upon the relationship of Bella and Edward and came from the perfect person. When I first started reading I though it would be Rosalie's thoughts, an insight as to why she doesn't want Bella to change. I was quickly cured of that notion. I find myself agreeing wholeheartedly as it makes perfect sense. These vampires were designed to make people want them, which is, of course, why Bella is worshipping Edward but believes herself to be in love. Which, in a way, she is. I believe you need to love in order to worship but it is not an equal love. Edward is plainly fascinated with not being able to hear her thoughts. Something which even Twilight agreed upon. Not hearing her thoughts was in part responsible for not eating her when he smelt her. The other parts being the reasons given in the book - his family, killing the class, Charlie would be left alone, etc.

I especially liked where Jasper would encourage Bella to still be herself after the wedding to help their love grow into an equal love, a partnership with two distinct beings joined together. I can see him doing that in the books.

I am now feeling quite jealous of you that you were able to come to such a conclusion and articulate it so well. I guess all that is left to say is - Well done! It was a delight to read and I shall look for more of your work in the future.
stephanie du jour chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I was linked here by a post in the lj comm twispitefic. Just wanted to say that I really admire the way you got into Jasper's head.
sweetmahogany chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
What a wonderful insight into Jasper's thoughts. I really enjoyed his take on things. I have so much respect for you and commend you on touching on some of the topics you did. Not too many authors would be willing to speak on "color" barriers and you did it expertly. This was truly a wonderfully well written one-shot.

Much love,

UncleBenjenIsBack chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
A great story. Very well written.
Blairx6661 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
This was amazing, I really enjoyed this! :)

caressa28 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Very well written. I love this side of Jasper. There is no bullshit. Just him being real. It's rereshing.
KSena chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Wonderful little thing. :-) Jasper really came to life here, and you made me like him. Not a small feat since I hate everything there is about Twilight usually. But this? This was good. VERY good. Well done. :-)
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