|Reviews for 10 Years From Now|
| Marshmallow73 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Aww, it's so cute!
| Hiroen Nnir chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
aw that was so cute! a bit low on the descriptions and a little confusing on whos talking but the idea was really cute!
| StrawberryShine chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
aw good job! I love this pair, its so adorable! xD
| rapturousdreams chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
uwaa! i love this! so...cute! hihi! i wonder what would really happen to them 10 years from now...bet they'd be chased by girls every second. don't you think? haha! hope they end up together. i like maruixakaya. :)
p.s. did you really like my story? i mean, it was a spur of the moment kind of thing. my friend suggested i should right a story about them since i bugged her about them. haha! :)
| azab chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
your stories are really cute i love all of them
| Dudly chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
You know, the idea is not bad, but you greatly need more descriptions. x_x Having only dialogues is not good. You can't get into a story with only dialogues. Theatre has descriptions of movement, at least. (But don't do it script format)
Just work on your descriptive a bit. I'm sure the result will be wonderful! D
| Neerod chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
| verbal acuity chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
That was actually really cute. I adored it! And Kirihara and Marui would LOVE to live with each other ten years from now. Really. Great job!
| mesmerizedbyceruleaneyes chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
maruiXakaya XD! what's their pairing name again?
it IS kinda short, but it's fine. i like the way akaya reacted to marui's suggestion...
| Hiroro chapter 1 . 3/31/2008