|Reviews for The Fine Line|
| AlsethGosia chapter 19 . 2/14
Please, don't leave this amazingly written story unfinished
| chrisdenvl chapter 19 . 12/25/2013
That was, or rather: is, exceptionally rude of you, you know? If that was one of those sappy/crappy fics out there, I'd never bat an eyelash that you've dropped it. Unfortunately, I find the story good. Engrossing, vivid, with feisty characters and somewhat puzzling setup. I've read it, liked it, re-read it... and then checked when was your last update.
Three bloody years ago. Either have the courtesy to tell us to sod off, or update. I'm stuck, you see. And being stuck is what pisses me off like no other thing on this boring planet of ours.
| Ms. Rugby chapter 19 . 12/13/2013
Huh seems like you abandoned this story, even though it is written so well. That's too bad. I'll hold out some hope and follow it anyway. Just in case you get inspired.
| ArtisticallyAndr chapter 19 . 12/12/2013
woah this is definitely the best hermione/bellatrix fic ive read thus far! love the concept, very original. I hope you keep writing until its done, i cant wait to read more! excellent job!
| Elena chapter 13 . 11/10/2013
It's just starting to get good! Too bad you abandoned this story without any regard for your readers.
| Elena chapter 5 . 11/10/2013
The style of font you use is odd and distracting. Half of the chapter is normal font, then you change it to italics, and now this chapter is all underlined. You should choose one font style and stick with it.
| Slytherin chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
"Mendez" is not an old wizarding name!
| pho3nix1705 chapter 19 . 5/25/2013
Oh no theres no more and seems to be a long time since you updated! I need to know what happens...
| cha1890 chapter 19 . 4/21/2013
it needs a next chapter. Too much good writing to let it so. Please ;)
| CaraCersei chapter 19 . 4/8/2013
This is so good! Please update!
| hintermhorizont chapter 19 . 2/21/2013
It's been 2 years, please update. ;_;
| Deathnoteuser chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
*grins* I like the sound of this. Can't wait to read the rest.
| Kigo Stories chapter 19 . 1/22/2013
i think this is in a really good time to continue ;) *hint hint*
| Cold War Transmissions chapter 19 . 11/24/2012
I have perpetually checked for updates over the span of two years, hoping for more- and that's not about to stop any time soon. I'm absolutely captivated by your portrayal of these characters, and you left us all with such a cliffhanger, it's quite literally unfair on us! I've read reviews from your other readers; I believe I'm not alone when I implore for another chapter. ; _ ; OH GOD PLEASE
| A2463 chapter 13 . 11/21/2012