|Reviews for winter rising|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
So good! I like how you have Jason slowly remembering his past as David so there's more of a basis for the mental break. And the "Nicky Parsons is unassuming, sweet-tempered, and has the biggest blue eyes you will ever see" line from the first oneshot is so well played.
| Aeidhryn chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Oddly enough, I quite liked your ending, though it had almost nothing to do with the rest. I don't know. I liked it.
| Goomba chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I had to page mark to leave work - but I'm sure it was delectable and I will review better in next story.
| NicolinaN chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I love how you tie this in with the movie. Beautifully done. The ending is perfect. :) And I'm also kinda in love with Jason Bourne...
| findingthewayhome chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Wow, this is awesome! Can't wait to read the other two stories after this :) I love the Nicky/David angst :D
| Badr chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Haha, I know that feeling, loving Jason Bourne. I'm there too. Have you read the books? They're really good, so if not, you should give them a try.
Anyway, about the fic. I think you've handled Nikki's characterization a lot better in this one-she's more fleshed out, and the ending especially is right on target, if you're willing to go with the relationship. Unfortunately...I still can't see anything that convinces me that she and Jason were together. There's no evidence, in the first two movies in particular, and you haven't fabricated any in here that makes me stop and say, "Oh, yeah."-except for one thing, and that's the hair. The hair was an excellent touch.
Other than that, though, even the part in which you have her say "It's D-Bourne, isn't it" feels just a little too forced, because of course there was no such stumble in the movie.
Sorry to be so picky; I really do like your writing. On to the next, then, and I hope you don't hate me for my reviews.
| Mishelle20 chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Great fic, I can't wait to read the next part.
| animeship chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Lovely piece good work!
| mary-v chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
UGH. You kill me. Everytime I read something you wrote I just get totally inspired by it.
| neo-laydee chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
I'm loving your stories!
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Awesome. I love your take on this side of the story- very sweet and sad. Great writing: there were no awkward phrasings or sentences. Good job!
| Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
That was fast. Great. :D
Oh god, this was so perfect. It made me cry. I love this part. *sniffle* Your characterizations of Nicky and David are wonderful and so believable. Please more. Please. :) It was really perfect.
| DeepBlueQL chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Another installment so quickly!
Can't wait for more!