|Reviews for The Snowball Effect|
| ScarkitTheMadaNeko chapter 12 . 2/11
Hmm... Im gonna have to consider the difference between their races in my own fic now.. I never thought about it like that before, good job!
| Claywind chapter 12 . 2/6
This is just downright ... right
It is perfectly written, in the sense that, when Kagome believes Sesshomaru is an asshole, I did believe it too (not a single second of doubt, but a lot of grumbling about the stupid dog)
And when All-Knowing-Rin comes in and says that Kagome hasn't been paying attention... Crap ! I mentally facepalmed...
And the dog-behaviour-relationship-thing works so damn well !
ARGH ! It's just great work
| Claywind chapter 11 . 2/6
Oh Rin, who knows everything about His Fluffyness...
And if I may : KYAAAAAAAAAA !
Yeah... sorry about that.
Oh well, this is amazing. Even though, as stated, there isn't much interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome, it doesn't matter here, because they are so very adorable, and, as a reader, I do believe that they've had some ellipsed time to speak and get to know each other a bit more during the couple of days
(now, I'll just run to the last chapter, because there's no way I'd not read the end of this incredible thing)
| Claywind chapter 10 . 2/6
-Of course he knew about the bet.
-And how exactly did he ?
-Well... It is Sesshomaru.
-Yet you didn't explain exactly HOW he came to know about that.
-This Sesshomaru doesn't need to explain his ways. He just knows.
-Keh ! If I may say...
-Let me just hint that he listens to everything
Oh gods, I have to read that chapter again. It's just how good it is.
(the weird dialogue just happened inside my head and, as it summarize very well my first reaction to the end of the chapter, there you go)
| Claywind chapter 8 . 2/6
Well I certainely hopes he recovers. ... actually I doubt he won't... I mean, he's recovered from Tetsussaiga/Tessaiga's Wind scar fully blasted at him, so how could a whistle be that hardcore ? But then, I don't know anything about ear injuries, except that once the inner ear is damaged, there's not much that can be done... so all in one, I have no idea what's going to happen and I'm most definitely going to find out. He can't stay deaf, that'd be too cruel
Because if he does, he'd have lost one of his mots precious senses (with smelling)
And who's going to feel super guilty ?
Will she have the guts to explain him how such a "terrible weapon" ended up in the hand of a little human boy ?
| Claywind chapter 7 . 2/6
Kagome's inner rant should have been an outward speech directed at one stubborn hanyou ! It would have been so funny ! I just yearn to know what Inu' reaction would be
(I'm certainely not telling you how to do your job... you do it absolutely better than anyone could. I just stated a wish that came to my mind right after finishing Kagome's rant)
And : Whoah... Lord-All-Mighty-Fluff has been... wounded ? How's that even possible ? (I hope he hasn't lost another arm... that'd be silly )
| Claywind chapter 5 . 2/6
Oh and I forget every time to mention it but : the titles of the chapters are really cool
"With his beautiful look, girls don't care if he's an asshole" ... I'm sorry but no. (well actually, yes, I'm pretty sure that exists, but most females in their right mind would rather have a nice normal-looking guy than a beautiful asshole... However, the said "bitches" might be more interested with his power and influence over the way he looks. He IS the lord of the Western Lands after all)
Oh and, thanks for the wisdom :
Strategy found in book doesn't work ?
Find different book.
And gods, the convenient half-brother who shows up to prevent a damn-too-early-fall, just great
| Claywind chapter 3 . 2/6
Oh GODS ! Sesshomaru's arrival was so freaking perfect !
I was kinda wishing for a "subdued" Kagome, rolling on her back and barking...
But this fits just too well
Oh and the depiction of Rin (who will grow up and wonder where babies come from and leave to find out) is simply priceless...
There's only one thing that disturbs me : Sango being a bitch. I always saw Sango as a very nice person and, though I completely understands her reaction in chapter 1 (don't touch the monk. Don't. Touch.) I find it hard to believe that she would stay mad at Kagome for what she must know... was an accident
So there was my only concern, the rest is perfectly hilarious.
Oh and :
Inuyasha the simple guy, a bit rude but genuinely nice
Sesshomaru the complicated guy, cold deadly and murderous
Guess who's the ladies' choice ?
Yep. I couldn't agree more.
| Claywind chapter 2 . 2/6
Ooooh, this is amazing.
You just keep me laughing more and more.
And the constant referring to the fact that he's a dog...
I also adore the way you use Yuka. Finally, one of Kagome's friends serves her purpose as a friend and help... while finding the said-Kagome quite on the weird side...
| Claywind chapter 1 . 2/6
It does begin very well... having let a few giggles lose on the course of the reading
...and the two boys absolutely unwilling to dare interrupt two girls fighting did make me laugh my ass off
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 9 . 12/26/2013
Lol never confess to a guy when he is asleep either..or do...those sneaky males. Lol but hey, it gave her the courage...until she found out
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 3 . 12/26/2013
She never said the kiss had to be the face right? Why not his hand...or hair..or an Eskimo kiss to the hair or neck...lol cause I think it is hilarious to make it seem like Kagome is sniffing his neck. Rofl
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 2 . 12/26/2013
Bwahahaha! I snorted loudly with laughter...then I laughed at my snort then at imagining Kagome rolling over on the grass with her tongue stuck out in a dog manner and Sesshōmaru wondering why he interacts which such strange abnormal humans.
| emeraldd30 chapter 12 . 10/27/2013
The ending was so romantic. The words spoken and the neck nipping, so sexy!
| Livie chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
OMG that was soooo good! Love the snark ;)