|Reviews for Oyako Onmitsu|
| Neo-Devil chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
bring upon the chunnin exams
| Neo-Devil chapter 14 . 6/5/2013
uh about that, there must be a sequel, but you can have my help with the Naruto series, the most popular pairing for Naruto is Naruto x Hinata so there is a start, ask me for advice if you want help with a Naruto fanfic.
| Matsukaze Tenma chapter 13 . 8/31/2012
I am really curious on what will happen next...please update soon
PS: also I wonder who else will appear amongst Lloyd's friends and will they all accept Naruto for who he is just like Lloyd had done?
| Matsukaze Tenma chapter 14 . 8/31/2012
This is an excellent fanfic; please update soon
| ThetrueAmeliaP chapter 14 . 12/30/2011
Trust me, I like this story very much. But personally, I would have liked for Lloyd to receive the exsphere instead of Naruto, balance it out more. Remember it is only personal opinion. Other than that, you had me on the edge of my seat.
| DennyTribal chapter 7 . 6/26/2011
Genis :D I love that lil shrimp x3 Except the fact his name... LEt's not go there...
Anyway AWESOME story! I'm totally addicted to it. x3
| Aimee of Twilight chapter 14 . 4/15/2011
This fic was AWESOME! I wish you'd write another, but you don't gotta!
| Aimee of Twilight chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
lemme guess, Lloyd saw Naruto. The only person with blond hair, blue eyes, and whisker marks is Naruto.
| Link Fangirl01 chapter 14 . 3/24/2011
Well this was quite the enjoyable read. _ Didn't think it was possible to tie these two universes together, but you managed it.
Thanks for writing.
| Subject 342 chapter 3 . 1/11/2011
You SO need to draw a picture of ninja Kratos! :)
And srsly, continue this story! D:
| Subject 342 chapter 14 . 1/10/2011
That "Stone" is Lloyd's exshpere, right? So once Lloyd finds his Key Crest, he'll be able to use his exsphere again.
Thank Martel Naruto's safe! :D
| Subject 342 chapter 9 . 1/10/2011
NOOO! WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO NARUTO! D:
| BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 14 . 8/27/2010
Interesting chappie...doesn't Madra have Lloyd's Key Crest? Can't wait for the next chappie!
| Toyax chapter 14 . 6/27/2010
It was okay, glad you're happy though.
| Shya kitty chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Um though i sort of ish read this already I was just wondering, why doesn't Genis just take off his exspher, give naruto the key crest take Lloyd's exsphere off of him and then reclaim the crest? I know you gotta use your plot bunnies up and it would be sorta anti climactic, it would be much easier. well whever its still good.