Reviews for Broken Faith
Duchess of Strumpetness chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Loved it. I had forgot about that scene so this brings it all back to me very clearly. Terrific stuff
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
An awesome piece. You managed to capture Mal's character and make the story sound like him without throwing in all the unnecessary 'gorrams' and apostraphes, which is nice. I love how he left the cross, and I love the last livbe. Great structure and use of spacing.

KrisEleven
JayElem0 chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I like the thinking, feeling Mal, even when he won't let others see him think and feel. Lovely... Thank you.