Reviews for On Your Way
Starlit Skyline chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I'll keep it short - this was amazing! The theme and Anko's flashbacks as she wonders the empty house are so realistic, this is a wonderful oneshot!
Jigoku-Dayu93 chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Great little fic! The story and the writing are incredible! I only wish it lasted longer as it was that engrossing.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
I liked it~!
Trissacar chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
very good i hope u continue this! :3
Cardplay chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
I just love your style!

The way the memory's fit in as she's looking at everything was a great idea. You executed it well, I'm just sorry more people haven't commented your work!
InTheShadowOfSignificance chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
I loved some of your lines. "Tarnished with the slow decay of time." Really vivid imagery there, but anyway, Orochimaru has always been one of the most interesting characters in my mind and this insight was really nice. Great story.

cinnamonblood chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Oh, this is nice. I liked it!
LullabyForTheLost chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Very insightful, I love the background you provide.

"...tarnished with the slow decay of time." Nice line there.
SickDeath chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
It really moved me! Beautiful.
little-peachmomoko chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
this was very sweet!

I love Anko's retained individuality from her past, and how you portrayed it, contrary to many who identify her solely with her past.

LOL, i'm way too into this.

lovely story!
chibibaka1 chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
That was beautiful. I love the images you used to describe Orochimaru's house, and the way you intergrated the flashbacks into the story fit really nicely. I'm adding this to my favorite stories